And also that one will dry
By Any
Without promises
I wanted to stay with you, snowman
But you saw the light
Living in a world without me.
For you that was the end of the story
Your blood as cold as the water of the Arctic
I wanna hurt you just to hear you screaming my name -
But snowmen don't scream.
Every day it's getting harder
I wanna touch you -
But then my heart would freeze
Snowmen don't exude any warmth.
Our time is running out
Shall I give up the thought of love?
Why did I want what I wanted from you, baby?
Why did you freeze my heart?
Trying to get over it is making me crazy
The more I am put into light -
The smaller you become.
Are you crying, snowman?
Your cheeks - so wet
Don't be afraid, snowman -
Soon we will meet again
Don't lose your faith - I forgive you...
But one day you were gone
And there was only more a puddle
On my pillow -
And also that one will dry.
Comments on "And also that one will dry "
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On Friday, May 15, 2009, Lylani
(112) wrote:
Great write and lovely images, the end was perfect, but sad
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On Friday, May 15, 2009, Soldier Of Silence
(42) wrote:
Must have been one hell of an enchanting "snowman". The storms of love will weather again and there will be another snowman for you. Good write.
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On Friday, May 15, 2009, Any
(39) wrote:
No snowmen anymore, thanks.
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On Friday, May 15, 2009, ALBATROSS
(194) wrote:
That was a nice and tastefully done extended metaphor. Quite an enjoyable poem thank you. =]
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On Friday, May 15, 2009, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
I like the use of "snowman" in here, it allowed for me as the reader to put things together. I can feel the pain of wanting, wishing. I enjoyed this.