I Hate Marionettes in the Dark

By Soldier Of Silence

Smiling faces accompany lifeless bodies
Twirling in the dark

Miniature people dangling from the rafters
Waiting in predatory anticipation

Evil little demons in pretty little outfits
With a button nose and razor sharp teeth

Hinged mouths whisper silent words of death
And painted eyes decipher your fate

Tiny hands grip your neck in passing
While dagger like fingers slash your throat

Childish laughter is the last thing you hear
From the soulless wooden corpse

As you bleed out on the dusty floor
Of the Puppet Master’s basement

This reason and this reason alone
Is why I hate marionettes in the dark

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© 2009 Soldier Of Silence
Published on Friday, May 15, 2009.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Riven Waker On Friday, May 15, 2009, Riven Waker (317)By person wrote:

    this is goddamn bloody brilliant - i loved every moment of it - give us more!

  • Lylani On Friday, May 15, 2009, Lylani (112)By person wrote:

    I feel like each couple of lines zooms in on the picture closer each time until the true scene is revealed, very effective, really liked this

  • Mylissa On Friday, May 15, 2009, Mylissa (825)By person wrote:

    Reminds me of the twilight zone for some reason. It was written with a twist of a sinister nature. I love it. You're really finding your flow here. Yes!

  • ALBATROSS On Friday, May 15, 2009, ALBATROSS (194)By person wrote:

    "As you bleed out on the dusty floor Of the Puppet Master’s basement " I think that's the most hurtful of being part of the marionette in the dark, you don't even get taken care of. I really felt this poem. Was wonderful. Good write.

  • A former member wrote: can't help but think of Pino-killo (spanish accent required for intended effect). This read like it was a fun write, inspiring.

  • A former member wrote: *pulls strings to show a disheveled shark-toothy grin* interesting write..I enjoyed.

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