I Hate Marionettes in the Dark
By Soldier Of Silence
Smiling faces accompany lifeless bodies
Twirling in the dark
Miniature people dangling from the rafters
Waiting in predatory anticipation
Evil little demons in pretty little outfits
With a button nose and razor sharp teeth
Hinged mouths whisper silent words of death
And painted eyes decipher your fate
Tiny hands grip your neck in passing
While dagger like fingers slash your throat
Childish laughter is the last thing you hear
From the soulless wooden corpse
As you bleed out on the dusty floor
Of the Puppet Master’s basement
This reason and this reason alone
Is why I hate marionettes in the dark
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© 2009 Soldier Of Silence
Published on Friday, May 15, 2009.
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Comments on "I Hate Marionettes in the Dark"
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On Friday, May 15, 2009, Riven Waker
(317) wrote:
this is goddamn bloody brilliant - i loved every moment of it - give us more!
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On Friday, May 15, 2009, Lylani
(112) wrote:
I feel like each couple of lines zooms in on the picture closer each time until the true scene is revealed, very effective, really liked this
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On Friday, May 15, 2009, Mylissa
(825) wrote:
Reminds me of the twilight zone for some reason. It was written with a twist of a sinister nature. I love it. You're really finding your flow here. Yes!
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On Friday, May 15, 2009, ALBATROSS
(194) wrote:
"As you bleed out on the dusty floor Of the Puppet Master’s basement " I think that's the most hurtful of being part of the marionette in the dark, you don't even get taken care of. I really felt this poem. Was wonderful. Good write.
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A former member wrote:
can't help but think of Pino-killo (spanish accent required for intended effect). This read like it was a fun write, inspiring.
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A former member wrote:
*pulls strings to show a disheveled shark-toothy grin* interesting write..I enjoyed.