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Surrendering to Angels
By Leith Plunkett
An angel came as a single drop of rain
Seduction to parched lips
A breeze of silken fingers
When diction falters perfection
and emotion consumes reason
Words are no longer adequate
.
.
Just breathe deep
and
surrender
**Thankyou Mars**
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© 2009 Leith Plunkett
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On Tuesday, December 12, 2017, Cassette
(1144)
wrote:
so much packed into this piece.
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A former member wrote:
Thats the stuff,....really enjoy your way of words,...hope your well mate.
beautiful write man.
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On Friday, February 27, 2009, Lylani
(116) wrote:
So beautifully soft and perfectly formed like falling on to feather pillows
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On Sunday, February 22, 2009, disposable
(105) wrote:
love love love the sueducttion of parched lips-and all from an angel. you are excellent. i glad mars gave you some advice-i found myself doing the same, leith. and ty friend for keeping me on your favorites. your a trooper. ;0)
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A former member wrote:
sweet sweet surrender,...when well built walls come crumbling down and all there was......is in her,.....beautifully sur.rendered.
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On Monday, February 16, 2009, Narcissa
(404) wrote:
Is there no better place than in the presence of angels? *sighs* ...perfect.
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On Sunday, February 15, 2009, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
I had to come back to this piece. It is so lovely...
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A former member wrote:
.......poetry at its finest. . .. subtle and soft; seductive and quiet. . .. . like the after glow of a kiss..indeed. .. 'words are no longer adequate'--i know this..we should ALL know this. . .. and i shall remain in the silent wordlessness of your talent. gutted--absolutely. perfect. +(\)ess
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On Saturday, February 14, 2009, Echoes of Orpheus
(359) wrote:
Perfectly written, just the right length and not one wasted word here.
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On Saturday, February 14, 2009, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
Oh, may I ask about the footnote? I'm curious (translation-nosy)--if it's not to personal to share, I'd enjoy knowing how our Ms. Mars contributed to the creation of this work of art.
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On Saturday, February 14, 2009, Leith Plunkett
(239) wrote:
I usually write of losing love and have stuggled to do so at late. Mars shared some advice about imbracing what I do have now I am in a more possitive frame of mind in my life. It really helped unlock/broaden my thoughts. I was forcing feelings that were not there.
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On Saturday, February 14, 2009, The Lipstick Factor
(290) wrote:
Hmmm--not writing huh?--Methinks you're were just holding out!--*lol*--just kidding. However, for someone who wasn't writing, you sure the hell are now. This is perfection with succinct imagery, breathtaking word choices and that ending....well...it simply says it all, doesn't it?
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On Saturday, February 14, 2009, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
Not bad at all..
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