More than this

By Vampixie

Verse 1:
I don't know why I'm here
I don't know if you'll ever join me
I don't think I was near
didn't realise how far you were from me

Chorus:
But don't think I didn't know
that something was wrong
Don't think I didn't notice
you'd drifted away
I just didn't realise
how far you'd gone
I couldn't see there was more to this...

Verse 2:
I don't know what I've done
don't know the extent that I've messed up
I don't know how you won
didn't think that you'd dressed up to see me

Bridge:
fall down
lose it all
Tear the wall down
a memory stalls
Fall down
lose it all
Tear me down
the memory stalls

Chorus:
Don't think I didn't know
that something was wrong
Don't think I didn't notice
you'd drifted away
I just didn't realise
how far you'd gone
I couldn't see there was more to this...

Don't think I didn't know
that something was wrong
Don't think I didn't notice
you'd drifted away
I just didn't realise
how far you'd gone
I couldn't see there was more to this...

Couldn't see there was more to this...

Couldn't see there was more than this...

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© 2009 Vampixie
Published on Tuesday, April 21, 2009.     Filed under: "Reflective" and "Lyrics"
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  • MESUN On Friday, April 24, 2009, MESUN (230)By person wrote:

    That was beautiful. In my head the rhythm was smooth and sad. I started placing it to music as I read it. Good job.

  • Lylani On Tuesday, April 21, 2009, Lylani (112)By person wrote:

    Due to my lack of musical ability I tend to find it really hard to read lyrics, but this I really liked, particularly the chorus, it seems a really raw honest write. Good work!

  • A former member wrote: nice work, but it feels incomplete somehow... jus my perception...

  • Vampixie On Wednesday, April 22, 2009, Vampixie (13)By person wrote:

    I agree with you, actually...but then, my work hardly ever feels complete to me ~Pixie~

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