More than this
By Vampixie
Verse 1:
I don't know why I'm here
I don't know if you'll ever join me
I don't think I was near
didn't realise how far you were from me
Chorus:
But don't think I didn't know
that something was wrong
Don't think I didn't notice
you'd drifted away
I just didn't realise
how far you'd gone
I couldn't see there was more to this...
Verse 2:
I don't know what I've done
don't know the extent that I've messed up
I don't know how you won
didn't think that you'd dressed up to see me
Bridge:
fall down
lose it all
Tear the wall down
a memory stalls
Fall down
lose it all
Tear me down
the memory stalls
Chorus:
Don't think I didn't know
that something was wrong
Don't think I didn't notice
you'd drifted away
I just didn't realise
how far you'd gone
I couldn't see there was more to this...
Don't think I didn't know
that something was wrong
Don't think I didn't notice
you'd drifted away
I just didn't realise
how far you'd gone
I couldn't see there was more to this...
Couldn't see there was more to this...
Couldn't see there was more than this...
Comments on "More than this"
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On Friday, April 24, 2009, MESUN
(230) wrote:
That was beautiful. In my head the rhythm was smooth and sad. I started placing it to music as I read it. Good job.
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On Tuesday, April 21, 2009, Lylani
(112) wrote:
Due to my lack of musical ability I tend to find it really hard to read lyrics, but this I really liked, particularly the chorus, it seems a really raw honest write. Good work!
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A former member wrote:
nice work,
but it feels incomplete somehow...
jus my perception...
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On Wednesday, April 22, 2009, Vampixie
(13) wrote:
I agree with you, actually...but then, my work hardly ever feels complete to me ~Pixie~