Evergreen
By Rowan
Gazing through the branches, I see the stars.
Far from me they appear
to be, but that is where
my final destination rests.
The
Oak, solid as a fortress hangs over me
waiting for my final decision
to take place.
No one will miss us.
For many years this
place has been sanctuary,
but not for those who are living.
Evergreen
holds the dead beneath its grounds.
Mist rises from the new
fallen dew
swirling around stones carved in ornate patterns.
My
favorite, Cinderella, plays beside the Rose.
The Spanish Moss
drifts on the slight midnight breeze
and settles as if sighing in
unison.
No one can save me now.
With rope in hand, no more
waiting.
Thrown over the branch of Oak.
Pulled taut.
No
breath, no life.
As the night fades, so does my will.
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Copyright 2010 Rowan
Author's Note:
If anyone is interested, this is about an actual cemetery in my town called Evergreen Cemetery. Evergreen is over 200 years old and holds some of the darkest secrets. There is indeed, an actual Cinderella buried in Evergreen.Comments on "Evergreen"
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On Wednesday, December 17, 2014, Nimue44
(289) wrote:
Death remains in evergreen. Quite a curious name for the graveyard, but your poem actually captures the essence of it.
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A former member wrote:
Such a great poem.. and the meaning behind...simply mesmerizing.
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A former member wrote:
Cinderella for real!!! I thought she was in a fairy tale.Well i bet her ghost still haunts there.Hey go there at night and take lots of photographs ghost hunting is fun:):)Oh one more thing......great write Rowan,thanks for sharing:)
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On Thursday, July 22, 2010, Rowan
(197) wrote:
Yes! There is a Cinderella buried there. She was almost 3 years old when she died. I love to visit her.
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On Monday, April 5, 2010, ubiquitoussoul
(343) wrote:
The imagery..so dark and cold..I can see the lit sky..Cinderella playing..I hear the sighs..Grim little poem...
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On Monday, April 5, 2010, lupus tenebrae
(860) wrote:
Great visual write, that's neat this is based on an actual cemetery, I used to live next to one where Charles Manson's aunt was buried, very tragic, dark write, thanks for sharing.
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On Thursday, April 1, 2010, jajang829
(23) wrote:
I LOVE the imagery! :)
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On Wednesday, March 3, 2010, ColourGod
(43) wrote:
If only you used the word evergreen instead of oak. Evergreens and oaks do not give a similar image to my mind. Aside from that I relate wholly to the feel of the poem, and appreciate the use of the oak tree. If my contradiction makes sense I applaud you.
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A former member wrote:
Great visuals and theme. Sadness looms over but there is always a way out, aways a stronger will. Nice write. =)
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A former member wrote:
beautifully ,visually written ! thank you for sharing:)
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On Saturday, February 20, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(806) wrote:
Great visuals, nicely written. What is a dark poem without a rope to hang your self. SWEET!
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A former member wrote:
AH! I REMEBER CINDERELLA, THIS IS SAD. SO DARK, I ALSO LIKE HOW DESCRIBE DA PLACE!