Wonderful

By jajang829

Who I am
Is not
Who I was.
But if
Those words are true
How can
It also be true
That who I was
Made me
Who I am?
And who
Am I really?
Am I not truly
A product of my past?
Whose mistakes
have shaped me?
Why mine
of course.
And if you think
I am so wonderful.
The I
That was molded
By those mistakes
Must wonder how
Such horrible mistakes
Can produce
Wonderful.
For surely
The acids and filth
I bathed myself in
Have created
Scars.
Can true beauty
Be found
Beyond
My self mutilation?
In reality
I know the answer
To these questions.
But
Do you?
Of course you do.
For you are
Wonderful.

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Copyright 2010 jajang829
Published on Sunday, April 11, 2010.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"

Author's Note:

This was kind of a free write poem, but the personal level at which this poem touches me goes much deeper than the words can convey. If I reach even a fraction of that with you, I will be content.
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  • Rowan On Monday, April 12, 2010, Rowan (197)By person wrote:

    Awe. Just pure awe. I loved every word. For who am I really? How do I view myself? Hmmm thoughts to ponder. "For you are Wonderful." That made me smile so big. I wasn't expecting that. But that was truly a perfect ending to a wonderful piece :) Thanks for the write Jajang!

  • A former member wrote: I enjoyed this write. It has great questions asked. There's a reason we should pay attention to the past. It's so we learn from it and don't repeat it.

  • A former member wrote: without the pieces of the past that remain as reminders..we may be condemned to repeat the same mistakes...I enjoyed reading this..very introspective...and y'know, some of us really dig scars ;)

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