no one

By mysticventures



I write

to bare

my soul


Yet,


no one

reads

my heart




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Copyright 2004 mysticventures
Published on Sunday, December 19, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sin On Saturday, January 15, 2005, Sin (1135)By person wrote:

    this stung...so short yet filled to the brim with pain

  • A former member wrote: The curse of quiet desperation. Excellence.

  • DarkWolf On Thursday, December 23, 2004, DarkWolf (415)By person wrote:

    Short and sorrowed it seems.. beautiful. -Michael

  • A former member wrote: well, it seems i have to comment again, and you took my favourite part and made it the whole write, so what's not to like :P

  • A_Puppet_Show On Sunday, December 19, 2004, A_Puppet_Show (163)By person wrote:

    You are a beautiful person. Tiger

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