Time

By Aurora_Light

Time is passing, Bells are ringing,
People singing, Blood is dripping.
You say you're fine but that's a lie,
You're dying right before my eyes.

Time is passing, Bells are ringing,
People singing, Blood is dripping.
You say your life is going well,
You just need some time to yourself.

Time is passing, Bells are ringing,
People singing, Blood is dripping.
Your life is slipping away from you,
As your blood flows out of you.

Time is passing, Bells are ringing,
People singing, Blood is drying.
Some stand and ask you why,
Others just sit and cry.

Time is passing, Bells are ringing,
People crying, Blood is drying.
The bells are silent on this day,
They mock your voice so they say.

Time is passing, Bells have rung,
People crying, Blood is drying.
The time has passed to ask you why,
All we can do now is say Good-Bye.

Time has passed, Bells have rung,
People crying, Blood is drying.
The time has passed the bells have rung,
Poeple still cry I still wonder why?

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Published on Tuesday, April 15, 2003. Filed under: "Tribute" and "Poetry"

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Comments on "Time"

A former member wrote: wow, i held my breath as i read this. then i read it twice more! u r awesome, great write
A former member wrote: You sent my mind on an adventure. This was utterly spectacular.
On Friday, April 27, 2012, ruthless48 (172) wrote:

excruciatingly relevant to geopolitical and intra ego id ~ congratulazioni
A former member wrote: gee i'm speechless nice write
On Thursday, January 8, 2004, Methos (121) wrote:

A poem with such depths and woe...created masterfully by talented hands...wonderful -Methos
A former member wrote: Everything i am, was, going to say has been said so i well keep my mouth shut and applaued...
On Sunday, August 10, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518) wrote:

Intelligent, emotional and catchy. What you want in a great write. And this one got plenty of it all. Of you.
A former member wrote: WOW I love this one. the first two lines are very good they catxh u and make you want more. and i want more please keep writing
On Friday, August 8, 2003, Abbyernathie (61) wrote:

i like this one tut tut. i've read it before, but it's one of my fav's.
A former member wrote: awsome
A former member wrote: wow..you have an amazing talent for writing.. i really like this poem its totally awesome! KeLLy-LyNN
A former member wrote: this has to be the best poem i have ever read if all your poems are this good then i would say you are the best poet i have seen
On Wednesday, June 4, 2003, maddin foxxxy (358) wrote:

what a beautiful write...i've got highlight the ending..excellent and touching aswell.
On Monday, May 26, 2003, CharlottesWeb (509) wrote:

It didn't regester what this was about until the third paragraph...then I felt like you'de snuck up behind me and kicked me right square in the Ass...and all I could do was gape and artisry of it all...;)~DW~
On Saturday, May 17, 2003, Griffin (114) wrote:

nice, i really liked it. i wouldnt say ur suicidal because it mentions it, but because of other stuff in there
On Monday, May 19, 2003, Griffin (114) wrote:

i love the repetivity of it
A former member wrote: Thou hath captured life and its darkened beauty in words..... I love it
On Wednesday, May 14, 2003, The_Scavenger (30) wrote:

This is a great poem. It reminds me of my past... and the darkness of poe. Poe is my favorite author but you are definetly a close second.
A former member wrote: Lovely.
A former member wrote: wonderful work Aurora. i was really captured by it. keep it up. ( you had me in suspense!)
A former member wrote: Very nice flow and progression. I really was captured by this one.
On Sunday, April 27, 2003, liquid_emotion (323) wrote:

this is a bit eerie... nice.
On Friday, April 25, 2003, Stranger (263) wrote:

Reminds me of Poe. That is the highest compliment I know how to give.
On Sunday, April 27, 2003, Aurora_Light (472) wrote:

wow i don't know what to say...thanks i never thought i'ld get a comment like that
On Wednesday, April 23, 2003, Delphoid-Q (213) wrote:

Very cleverly written. Lovely progression.
On Wednesday, April 16, 2003, Aurora_Light (472) wrote:

thanks i tried
On Wednesday, April 16, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321) wrote:

Love it Aurora...This is one of my favorites....The tune is catchy (wellI know the tune..lol u told me!)
A former member wrote: wow