Love & Pain

By The_Scavenger

Love is sweet, thought love was everlasting,
Wrong I was when twice she dumped me blasting,
This dagger in my chest.

This hole needs mending from this pending pain.
My soul needs filling, needs to feel completion.
To start the depletion of darkness and the rain.

The clouds are breaking and the weather fading,
Light is breaking through, the darkness is retracting
My soul is set a flame, love is blazing.

New beauty in my life, to show loves true face
A bright new angel sent from above to fill this space,
A lesson learned by this fellow, love comes and goes
But true love is everlasting


My poems always reflect what i am feeling at that point
in time. I dont know how to write any other way but please
comment on this for i do appreciate your words of wisdom.

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Copyright 2003 The_Scavenger
Published on Wednesday, May 14, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I love how all your poems aren't filled with total jibberish. its simple, but it has so much impact

  • Kinkypoptart On Monday, April 24, 2006, Kinkypoptart (555)By person wrote:

    Wow... The beginning seemed to angry, but in the end I felt you'd dealt with your pain. Great write ~*~Tart~*~

  • Blinded_Tiger On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Blinded_Tiger (518)By person wrote:

    This poem got depth. And i belived it to be true. That is what you want for a poem, and especially a love poem. Keep writing what you feel. I enjoyed this one.

  • A former member wrote: I like this alot....cant life be a bitch!

  • Aurora_Light On Tuesday, May 20, 2003, Aurora_Light (472)By person wrote:

    hey is the end about me? i like this

  • Rebel_Angel On Wednesday, June 4, 2003, Rebel_Angel (321)By person wrote:

    Nice write. Keep writing!

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