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Love & Pain
By The_Scavenger
Love is sweet, thought love was everlasting,
Wrong I was when twice
she dumped me blasting,
This dagger in my chest.
This
hole needs mending from this pending pain.
My soul needs filling,
needs to feel completion.
To start the depletion of darkness and
the rain.
The clouds are breaking and the weather fading,
Light is breaking through, the darkness is retracting
My soul
is set a flame, love is blazing.
New beauty in my life, to
show loves true face
A bright new angel sent from above to fill this
space,
A lesson learned by this fellow, love comes and goes
But true love is everlasting
My poems always reflect
what i am feeling at that point
in time. I dont know how to write
any other way but please
comment on this for i do appreciate your
words of wisdom.
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Copyright 2003 The_Scavenger
Published on Wednesday, May 14, 2003.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Love & Pain"
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A former member wrote:
I love how all your poems aren't filled with total jibberish. its simple, but it has so much impact
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On Monday, April 24, 2006, Kinkypoptart
(555)
wrote:
Wow... The beginning seemed to angry, but in the end I felt you'd dealt with your pain. Great write ~*~Tart~*~
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On Thursday, August 7, 2003, Blinded_Tiger
(518) wrote:
This poem got depth. And i belived it to be true. That is what you want for a poem, and especially a love poem. Keep writing what you feel. I enjoyed this one.
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A former member wrote:
I like this alot....cant life be a bitch!
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On Tuesday, May 20, 2003, Aurora_Light
(472) wrote:
hey is the end about me? i like this
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On Wednesday, June 4, 2003, Rebel_Angel
(321) wrote:
Nice write. Keep writing!
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