blood runs down my face
By cre
I can't breathe and
Your breath spins my cocoon
I've been fighting but
I think I'll be stopping soon
Every fear and every nightmare
Becomes my waking dream
And all I know is my life is not
What it should be . .
I can't cry and
Your words cut like a blade
I don't have tears but at least the blood
Runs down my face
Every hope and every hate
Falls to ash inside your flames
And all I see is killing me
I've become your sweet disgrace
I can't live and
Your sin is like a stone
Around my neck, and
The waters call me home
Every scream and every pain
Hushed on cold blue lips
And all I was will die with me
But I will tell you this
You won't breathe and you won't cry and
My fire will consume
All your hopes and all your dreams
It will all be over soon
You will burn inside my hate and
It will all be over soon
I can't cry and
your words cut like a blade
I don't have tears but at least the blood
Runs down my face
Runs down my face and
It will all be over soon
Comments on "blood runs down my face"
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On Monday, June 16, 2008, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
Intense, melodic, marvelous...that second verse was particularly clever...-l-
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On Friday, April 30, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
So intense and dark, these words had me by the throat and demanded the recognition of their power. I love the line "I don't have tears but at least the blood Runs down my face", deeply poignant. Beautiful. -L
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On Thursday, April 29, 2004, aXe FactoR
(333) wrote:
dear cre.. you're the best...simply great...!
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On Saturday, November 15, 2003, sole
(93) wrote:
My head got about a foot closer to my monitor reading this piece I was so consumed by it. Excellent
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On Friday, November 14, 2003, Lost_Soul
(34) wrote:
Simply amazing!!! I haven't read a poem and enjoyed this much in a very long time. Great job.
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On Saturday, October 18, 2003, Loserland
(113) wrote:
dark poetry at it's finest
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On Monday, October 13, 2003, CharlottesWeb
(509) wrote:
Mmm...I shouldn't be...I should be use to it by now...but still, I find myself in awe with the natural and fluent flow of every poem. This silvery smooth work of ended resistance had me drawn to my screen...3x. Beautiful...absolutely Beautiful.~JMDW~
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A former member wrote:
God Cre. This was...your poetry is everything I want mine to be. If I could ever get away from this love poem crap lol This is amazing...
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, SilentStalker
(1047) wrote:
...very powerful, very consuming...this write I thoroughly enjoyed reading, cre... -Darun
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A former member wrote:
Wow, very deep and powerful. I likes it lots!
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On Sunday, October 12, 2003, Johny_D_Lewis
(467) wrote:
haunting...gripping...where does the darkness come from...what feeds the darkness in you....great write...ian
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A former member wrote:
When fuel is added to our already burning fire, while we wait patiently for the right moment, quiet on the outside seething on the inside, is when I think the best plans for disposal are made. Nice cre, really enjoyed this. ~Urban Shipwreck~