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Incomplete
By diavolessa
Goodbye friend.
I hope I will never see you again
There are times when I feel sorry
Sorry for the person I grew up to be
I am sorry that I didn’t became a butterfly
A metamorphosis left incomplete
I am a bird that cannot fly
I am a song without a tune
I am a guitar left on a corner
With broken stings
There was a scream I could hear
And the ring bearer of destiny
Married fate told me to stop
I stopped, caught my breath
Realized at last it wasn’t my blunder
You were the one who slaughtered my soul
The one that poised these feeling
Maybe tomorrow I will grow
Become complete
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Copyright 2003 darkside
Published on Thursday, April 10, 2003.
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"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful written. Simple.
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On Saturday, June 14, 2003, Rebel_Angel
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wrote:
wow...very nice...Keep Writing!
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A former member wrote:
simpily wonderful
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On Monday, May 12, 2003, Midnight Phoenix
(240) wrote:
Very good analogies. I'm beginning to grasp your natural style of thought and poetry. Keep it up!
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A former member wrote:
sad ...i love it
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A former member wrote:
i thought i had commented on this one already but since i haven't i shall do so now....good write in structure and thought. I like the positive stance the poem takes..also like the way it was titled. Good write!
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On Friday, April 18, 2003, DoctorAsh
(371) wrote:
glad t5o C. a small implement of positive reaction ... let us play on the freeways .... very well done, much respect
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A former member wrote:
tres wonderful..contine writing!
you are definitely an inspiration
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On Thursday, April 10, 2003, CorruptedLittleGirl
(243) wrote:
Beautiful poem! Well done, darkside. :)
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