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dis.society
By purr_verse
sleep
war
king:
zzzzzzzzzzzzzi amzzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzherezzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzi am -zzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzhearzzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzam i heard?zzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzi amzzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzherdzzzzzzzzzzzzz
all crawl juxtajust/a/pose.d
inn fight awe flightening
imp o' light as darknests
re[de[ceptacles ova the whirled
zzzzzzzzzzzzzwe arezzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzzherezzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzwe are -zzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzhearzzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzare we heard?zzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzwe arezzzzzzzzzzzzz
zzzzzzzzzzzzzherdzzzzzzzzzzzzz
s.o.s
dit dit dit
da da da
dit dit dit
da da da
dit dit dit
dada
da
da-da-da-dah!
bang.
No act shun;
scream bloody worder.
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© 2005 Natalie Lyndon
Published on Thursday, December 22, 2005.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
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A former member wrote:
thanks for the read ,i like:)
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On Thursday, June 1, 2006, Mari
(425)
wrote:
almost makes me wanna think...almost
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A former member wrote:
a manic read, brilliance in deliberate/organisational formatting, the way it rolls and drums.. creatively masterful.
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On Friday, January 6, 2006, PoeticHellion
(191) wrote:
Excellent.
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On Wednesday, January 4, 2006, TheBardOfBlasphemy
(358) wrote:
grati-satis-faction... loop-line-lies licking my eyes... balls pop and roll... the floor is dirty now i see the truth... sleeeep... sleeeeeeep my precious herd of sheeeep... sheeeeeep...
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A former member wrote:
Wow the format you used here was killer. I love the lines inside the z's and the last two lines were perfect. Very killer. ~Ship!
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On Saturday, December 24, 2005, Northstar
(375) wrote:
you are defnitely masterful, yet again...surprise surprise *wink*
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A former member wrote:
"all crawl juxtajust/a/pose.d" Quite creatively structure-spun. The dada sound style works w/ a perfect bang; well done. I like the buzzing undertone feel/sound...zzz...
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On Friday, December 23, 2005, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
*structurally.. i'm not even sure that a word, but hey. I'll at least make a proper attempt to spell it right, ha
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On Friday, December 23, 2005, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
'No act shun; scream bloody worder.'.. I have nothing interesting to say, as ever.. but I thought i'd let you know that I enjoyed this rather a lot. Thank you for sharing it.
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On Friday, December 23, 2005, Railway_Butterfly
(354) wrote:
aah, I love poetry ike this. It's strucurally wonderful. I so wish I could write this way.. I really think it's fantastic. I have much respect for those who can :)
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A former member wrote:
mmmm. . .this felt like poprocks in my head; such a snip.snap write and i concur~ it did make loverly sense in some jabberwockish, brackish way... :}
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A former member wrote:
"we are herd" "No act shun" - this piece actually makes purr_fect sense to me. The format of the text reminds me of a candle-holder with the words "sleep war king:" being a flame. Very enjoyable. A pleasure to read, as always.
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On Thursday, December 22, 2005, blue
(1454) wrote:
=) sleep war king? damn. what a way to start a write!! this was fantastic in a sensical/non-sensical way (sensical? is that even a word?) anyway, you rock!! as per usual ;) ~b
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On Thursday, December 22, 2005, purr_verse
(1059) wrote:
dada piece...obviously. >:)
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