para | dice

By elisa



birth brings life
with a promise of death
.
and judging by the size
of the world wide population
.
.
God is growing tired
of the
human being

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Copyright 2005 elisa
Published on Sunday, August 7, 2005.     Filed under: "Philosophical" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: no doubt... I sometimes think that life is losing meaning simply because it is capitalism... the more lives ther are the less each one is worth, the more death there must be.... hmmmmmmm intriguing lines

  • TheBardOfBlasphemy On Saturday, August 27, 2005, TheBardOfBlasphemy (357)By person wrote:

    i promise that i will never die......... and i'm tired of god

  • elisa On Saturday, August 27, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    *breathes a sigh of relief* :)

  • A former member wrote: Heh you didn't waste any words with this, superbly crafted. Very awsome. ~Ship!

  • elisa On Thursday, August 25, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    concise and brutal....that's exactly what i thought.

  • Serenity On Saturday, August 13, 2005, Serenity (469)By person wrote:

    Insightful. I don't blame him either.

  • suicideseason On Sunday, August 21, 2005, suicideseason (1636)By person wrote:

    Her.

  • elisa On Tuesday, August 23, 2005, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    *demonic grin*..... you nailed it like a priest to an altar boy ..........my elucidator;)

  • peril_notion On Wednesday, August 10, 2005, peril_notion (87)By person wrote:

    How could they not grow tired of our manipulative antics?

  • vaultgrl On Sunday, August 7, 2005, vaultgrl (185)By person wrote:

    who wouldn't be, we don't exactly give ourselves a good reputation as a whole...good write

  • Forgotten Angel On Sunday, August 7, 2005, Forgotten Angel (309)By person wrote:

    this makes sense....and its true for the most part..but ikd...refreshing reading..love it! :) -Kel

  • Northstar On Sunday, August 7, 2005, Northstar (374)By person wrote:

    nicely done--unexpected and fresh

  • A former member wrote: Interesting spin on world population. I enjoyed reading this. Thank you.

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