[rainbows].and.[butterflies]
By Six-Out
::viewer discretion advised::
[open your eyes]
.i want to see your passion.
a lonely bead of water- sliding over your chin
as my tongue traces the curve of your supple. neck
with the curtains of fabricated rain-
cascading down.
_and my hands. working up
your lips. whispering your requests into my ear
as I silence you with a finger.
and a kiss.
a kiss.
down. from your lips.
with your tongue- caressing mine.
to your neck. and a graze of my lips. brings yours to a quiver
and. down.- to your chest
tasting your skin. as my mouth teases your areola
and I can feel the excitement in your nails.
digging into my back
with a hand clinching the shower curtain- and one in my hair
your urge me further..further- to your desire.
and a slight kiss on your stomach
leaves you breathless
and I look up-into those deep eyes.
as you whimper. just a little. your deepest want
and put your leg on my shoulder.
and babe. we've just begun.
.
[and you taste so sweet]
as you moan to the rhythm of my tongue
and you drip from my chin- with that devious smile
your hands ripping at my hair- for more
with a slight kiss. just to tease
licking your lips in seduction. or being seduced
as you pull at me. to get up
and look you in the eye
my hands. on your wrists
and your back pressed firmly against the wall
and your lips slightly trembling
as the water pours over us- steaming from the heat
possibly of us
as I slowly slide my hand- down your leg.
to the knee. and lift it
bringing it around me. to match your arms
those arms- with those nails. still digging. with need
and your body tightens.
slowly. slowly- I slide in
you. already dripping- in anticipation
and clinching me. with pure.passion
you whisper- slightly. 'now'
.
[and your whimper is a roar]
the deeper. d.e.e.p-er...I go
biting. pensively. on your bottom lip- to supress a scream
pulling my soaking hair- and kissing me.
and your back arches. pushing yourself onto me
pusing myself. [into] you
and your arms are around my neck.
with your leg around my side- and me.
over. every. inch. -of your body
as I thrust. and you scream. and your body tightens
and you fall back- against the wall.
vision clouded. with these erotic rainbows
and a stomach full of butterflies
the only sounds. are the shower
and our breathing. our hearts beating- and a whisper
of love. against a slick chest.
and a kiss. to break the silence
Comments on "[rainbows].and.[butterflies]"
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On Tuesday, January 18, 2011, scarletara
(58) wrote:
wow sexyhot smoldering sensuality. yum. love it
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On Friday, September 15, 2006, Dissolving Poet
(560) wrote:
.....O.o Fuck....o.O .... Well this has stolen my dreams...~Gothic
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On Thursday, September 14, 2006, i tremble
(29) wrote:
mmm..
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A former member wrote:
Your arousal comes in force, like a fauve current demeanor - words dance with elegance on a page of erotic desires in tangency with subtle philosophical allusions at the great divide... an exploration of the senses beyond sense and instincts, towards the
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A former member wrote:
towards the symbolic unification, purely intellectual mixed with sensuality. Excellent piece!
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On Saturday, April 30, 2005, Drea
(1388) wrote:
hmmm Read it to me again s..l..o..w..l..y
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On Saturday, April 30, 2005, Drea
(1388) wrote:
I mean...I hate you!
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On Thursday, April 28, 2005, hate_doll
(263) wrote:
I hate you for living in texas. what am I supposed to say? of course you know I adore it..yumm
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On Tuesday, April 26, 2005, elisa
(1595) wrote:
like i said when we were in the shower...'...ooooooooooooo.....d o n ' t s t o p. ...'.......i just love a good sex documentary.....my fav part..'...and you drip from my chin- with that devious smile..'...epic~elisa
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On Saturday, April 23, 2005, Trichotillomaniac
(42) wrote:
I love the way you use punctuation to accent the poem.
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A former member wrote:
Ooohhhhhhh...this is delightfully sensually beautiful, sweet friend, your gorgeous words of passion always light these pages wonderfully!
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A former member wrote:
this was the best fuckin' sexual poem i have read in a loong time. it's so passionate and so just, amazing. wow, heehee, it makes me want to call up someone i love... just simply exquisite. i loveloveloved it. ....-samone
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
i am amazed...completely and utterly amazed...at the erotic placement of your words.i can not even begin to describe what a wonder this is with...
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On Wednesday, April 20, 2005, AniDayz
(812) wrote:
-such a sensual.long lasting climax in my mind...a shower of intimate colours...dripping...[maybe i shouldve just:notsaid:anything + disappeared w/out a comment...still...im trying...and im failing, to project the amazingness resounding throughout this.
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A former member wrote:
Excellent. I'd leave a better comment, but right now I have to go see what the wife is doing. :)
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On Tuesday, April 19, 2005, NikesRain
(1240) wrote:
my gods this is divine..every bit of it sensual, erotic and decadent, gently flowing yet so utterly consuming....sublime in the extreme
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On Monday, April 18, 2005, Liz
(265) wrote:
"and babe. we've just begun" -great line. Left me grinning. "possibly of us" -not quite so great. Breaks the tone w/out the payoff. Overall hot and insightful, despite minor things like that.
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On Monday, April 18, 2005, Sin
(1135) wrote:
my god Jon, that was steamy and erotic...i think i need a cigarette after that...you are amazing with words dear ~kristy
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A former member wrote:
"open your eyes]
.i want to see your passion." Jesus christ. That first line made me all kinds of tingly.
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On Monday, April 18, 2005, Mistress Shadow
(249) wrote:
I love the title, it fits perfectly. Great read. ~T~
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On Monday, April 18, 2005, Dei
(663) wrote:
i dont really get the title. but i love it!
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On Monday, April 18, 2005, Lotophagi
(333) wrote:
sex me up and take me down..... damned hot.
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On Monday, April 18, 2005, KittyStryker
(710) wrote:
so where's MY poem, bitch? ;)
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On Monday, April 18, 2005, Velvet_Raventon
(446) wrote:
Damn, if Bast gets a poem then I want one too! Only not that kind of course =) ~V.
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On Monday, April 18, 2005, Six-Out
(1423) wrote:
Hah, I hope not one like this. Matt would kill me. :P
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A former member wrote:
Wow....That's all I can say