Comments by Velvet_Raventon

  • "Garlic is great, and it smells good too :) I think that if society had taught us that garlic smells good, we wouldn't feel nearly as self-conscious. But having "garlic breath" is bad, therefore everyone thinks it has to be bad. Down with preconceptions!"
    Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "garlic" by Jonas
  • "I think that the beginning should have comma instead, as the 2nd sentence doesn't make sense by itself. Also, "A gender neutral housing policy is found on Brown’s website [which, either here of before "is found"] states". A comma between "housing Dameian". That's it :)"
    Posted by Velvet_Raventon on "One Suite, one room, two genders - whole article" by Adam
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