Surf Life

By Mr King

Last weekend, my brother, who has surfed his whole life...
Took me out and taught me to surf...

Amazingly, to me...
I was eventually able to stand up and ride like four times...

I experienced it as life...
As a way of life...
And as a way to live life!

I'm gonna write a poem about it as soon as the waves gather...

And take me for that ride...

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Copyright 2004 Seth David King
Published on Tuesday, July 27, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • sixsixnine On Sunday, August 15, 2004, sixsixnine (476)By person wrote:

    surf life... sounds deep *669*

  • Anth On Wednesday, July 28, 2004, Anth (1126)By person wrote:

    cool man,i anticipate a great work then,i already see a lot in it, i like your attitude to life.as is shown even in this small prequel


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