Be Happy 2-Day
By knightmirror
i'm still trying
to be the father that mine was never for me
but it's really hard
since what i miss most,is our daily dance
i'm still crying
to clear all the pain out,so i can eventually
unite every shard
therefore,creating a duplicate of my last stance
where i remember tears of joy,
and smiles out of the blue,
clear skies harboring rainy days,
and seas of love washing pain away
but,
most importantly,i remember you
i'll still write
eventhough you're still to young to read
but i'm pretty sure
by the smell of this paper,you'll know it's Dad
i'll still fight
to be a part of your life,no matter how much i bleed
to see your smile so pure
and big beautiful ocean blue eyes,how could anyone be sad?
don't forget your my
Darling
Angel
Promising
Heaven
Near
Everyone
Awards
Comments on "Be Happy 2-Day"
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A former member wrote:
It's everything Im feeling right now. Thanx for sharing. Good work :)
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On Wednesday, December 8, 2004, Sin
(1135) wrote:
oh my...i cried when i read this. it does not get more beautiful than this. Chris i cant even say anymore because everytime i reread this i cry *hugs* thank you for sharing this ~kristy
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On Wednesday, November 10, 2004, Angst Queen
(370) wrote:
oh knight this is so sweet i'm touched by it. lucky little one your child is. i don't know how i missed this one
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A former member wrote:
oh damn... of all the literature I've read on this confounded website, i've never once read something that has brought tears to my eyes.
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, Lynaes
(854) wrote:
I too was deeply touched by the line that purr quoted. This was so sad and poignant, yet so beautiful. These words prove what a dedicated father you are. Gorgeous work. ~L
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, girlafraid
(479) wrote:
that is such a sweet and beautiful promise...best of luck to you and your daughter
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, purr_verse
(1052) wrote:
"but i'm pretty sure by the smell of this paper,you'll know it's Dad"... this is a really touching line in a very touching piece... Daphne will love this when she's no longer too young to read, i'm sure. :)
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
*wipes away tears*that line also is my favorite.thank you*sniffles*for quoting that line in your comment.really thank you purr.-chris
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, Dancing_Monkey
(1228) wrote:
damn dude. wat a way of telling that your a father.. *looks a bit scared* so how old are you ennyways... and congrats on your girl.
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On Sunday, April 11, 2004, knightmirror
(426) wrote:
Happy Birthday my dear DAPHNE.i love you with all my heart.