Eye of the Needle
By Mr King
releasing stress while driving.../
on the freeway wailing and whining.../
a passing bumper sticker reads, "Regime Change Starts at Home!"/
exotic doorway thru thin air still sought after via rod of divining.../
oh what a wonderful world on fire!/
what's the fastest way 4 me 2 create reality from this desire?/
trying 2 implant my poetry into the brain space of the American popular
audience just enough 2 succeed.../
while simultaneously creating an intelligent philosophical foundation 4
my seed/
trying not 2 fail 4 lack of sufficient stimulation.../
while working within the concentration limitations of an attention deficit
disorder generation!/
racking my own media infused brain.../
acid in my stomach forming a piercing pain/
survival of a poet in the Flaming Hot Cheeto ages.../
poem seems outdated before the pen hits the pages/
Red Hot Chili Pepto Bismol.../
but in these times where nothing's shocking and everything seems like a
cliche/
i can't stop because these words repressed.../
and never expressed.../
seem 2 dissolve the inner lining of my stomach away/
call me then an obsessed poet here 2 warn.../
standing out in the thundering rain.../
preaching intelligence and faith thru the storm/
trying 2 write something powerful 4 the good of man.../
while knowing that i must reach a piece of that elusive and ever shrinking
American attention span.../
trying 2 make it thru what looks like an eye of a needle, at this point,
appears 2 be the plan/
trying 2 survive the next big mass extinction event.../
will it be my Final Destination 2?/
living in a society where 1 man's life or death struggle 2 survive and
keep a dream alive is another man?s 50 Cent entertainment.../
sometimes it feels like i've already been thrown overboard with my feet
frozen in cement/
and although i've often had doubts, thinking i'll never make it, have no
way 2 reach you, and nowhere 2 run.../
from the edge of this apparently bottomless, apocalyptic, cruel world of
ignorant, depraved, and crooked men.../
i will ascend thru poetry one fine day with a bloody lifeline tied 2 my
tongue.../
teaching the children and helping 2 bring forth the Dawn of a New Civilization
like a rising Sun!/
4 this is where i make my stand.../
do or die with this flag.../
into the ground right here and now.../
i plant this One/
Comments on "Eye of the Needle"
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On Monday, November 24, 2003, Drifter
(265) wrote:
Never surrender it. I to see the need to make a stand and i try in my own way to change things through poetry and writing. You seem to be far more talented than I though.
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On Wednesday, November 19, 2003, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
"i will ascend thru poetry one fine day with a bloody lifeline tied 2 my tongue"..i like this line in particular...your style is raw and edgy but definitely appealing and full of possibilities... -l-
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On Friday, December 5, 2003, bloody LOVEly
(85) wrote:
I agree with both-your works are so talented and that line was about the greatest thing EVER. woo! (thanx for your commentary...) damnit-your commentary is better than mine too! wtf. ~*~cold~*~