Having a Picnic With Your Mind (A Tribute to the Poet)
By RubyXero
It's really most comical...
these surrounding faces
with drawn on voices
clown personalities
So I'm turned into my corner
More concerned and curious of you!
dear reader.
The fellow poet
Doctors... of the mind.
I value this time
when I escape the incandescent
artificial surface.
Climbing cool steps
down this wanton dungeon.
And upon entering
I trail my fingers
along the rocklike structure
My core pounds violently
as passion overwhelms...
The silence is roaring here!
thick screaming tempests
wishing to break
the zephyr.
With hurried whispers
filling the vibrantly onyx cave
I am consumed
by your words.
"He walks the night,
his lust for blood insatible..."
the scent
the desire
I pull on my hood, peering
potential victims...
The seasons turn
fertility and life
transition to frozen
barren wasted breath...
As you cry
"O! lift me as a wave, a leaf, a cloud!
I fall upon the thorns of life! I bleed!"
In desperate betrayal,
"I trusted you!"
Flooding my mind
with thrashing anguish
And the moisture fills me
as I bleed your heart
of pain.
In this aberration
I found my addiction.
for it is you!
my cherished poet,
whom I lay beside
while I slumber.
A fondled lover.
My muse
as I glide through battled
mediocrity.
Each word a speck
of sand in the hourglass
of wonder.
But...
I smashed the top on that prison!
and poured you into this
smoky sputum mouth.
Choking down dry
soggy emotions
I exhaled the steam
moving from the circumference
I settled down
to have a picnic
with your mind...
Author's Note:
It has been a while since "For Every Single Poet" I just wanted to post this piece to tribute the amazing poets on this siteComments on "Having a Picnic With Your Mind (A Tribute to the Poet)"
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On Wednesday, May 29, 2013, Kristoff
(37) wrote:
Beautiful... It seems to me like music for the eyes!
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On Thursday, May 23, 2013, haunted
(837) wrote:
yeah that about nailed it as being a day here at dark poetry. I agree that this site has incredible talent both old and young. its a tribute to the great poets on here but I got to give it up for this site making that possible. awesome ciera!
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On Thursday, May 23, 2013, Nehema
(958) wrote:
Sometimes I feel a prisoner to many poets here, never more so than reading your words elegantly describing the passionate beauty of being such a prisoner. Lovely piece from a lovely poet - XXOO
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A former member wrote:
I was going to quote my favorite lines... but I found myself reciting your whole poem... Its all so beautiful...
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On Wednesday, May 22, 2013, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
You worded my thoughts so beautifully, I too am in awe of the poets here in the Valley.
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On Wednesday, May 22, 2013, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...it's a lush garden that we have here, fragrant & stimulating...
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On Wednesday, May 22, 2013, Maladroit
(198) wrote:
I bet it is really good but the color made it impossible to read on my phone :(
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On Wednesday, May 22, 2013, Strataic
(99) wrote:
Although the colour is a bit off putting for my eyes against the black, you painted some lovely visuals in this piece, even if it has been a while nicely done. :)
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On Wednesday, May 22, 2013, dwells
(4177) wrote:
I recall a universal warning from my childhood, something along the lines of never marrying a poet, a painter, or a musician - I wonder why that was? People equating creativity perhaps with starving artists, leaving us to graze with the rest of the lowing cattle in anonymity. This was a striking piece that called to mind some of that memory, cheers Ruby (and we all thankyou for the tribute).