my questions to you

By knightmirror

what are you thinking???
are you still learning???
listening???
or have you forgotten what we're striving to find


what makes you better???
how have you gotten this far???
close???
you're surrounded by negativity and it's so hard to watch


haven't you had enough of this chic in control
of  life you recently revealed to me and have yours stole
i see you become complacent more each day
on a mindset where nothings in your way


well my colleague
your greed's
becoming your disease


with each breath
she takes
you that much
closer to
death


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Copyright 2013 knightmirror
Published on Wednesday, January 2, 2013.     Filed under: "Lyrics"
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  • A former member wrote: "You're surrounded by negativity and its so hard to watch." The simple truth, clearly stated, but with enough force to leave me breathless. Nicely done.

  • brokensme On Wednesday, January 2, 2013, brokensme (20)By person wrote:

    great write, i got very familiar feelings by reading this, thank you for the poem

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