333

By knightmirror

 

i awoke this morning
to visions of tin-foil flight
to your vernacular veranda
sitting down in a hammock
beside you as our wings quills
play charades weaved within
criss-cross netting acting
as a conductor

to our ever growing energy


with every move made
there's a natural counter-reaction
ever keeping the sparks we make
to trace the sky in tropical threads
in tin-foil flight blending sounds
to the optical stimulated
scenario of sensations


i look forward to the rest of the day

 

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Copyright 2012 knightmirror
Published on Saturday, December 22, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • knightmirror On Saturday, December 22, 2012, knightmirror (426)By person wrote:

    impressed that this creation set the mood for an inspiration piece written by kinkifrog....who by far surpassed me...just wanted to say thanks karen...much love and respect....-chris

  • kinkifrog On Saturday, December 22, 2012, kinkifrog (2691)By person wrote:

    'tis true this inspired 999...thank you ... :) ... you lost the "inspired by " link when your poem moved house... ~blessings~ Scholar

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