Apparent...
By urbanhumility
Apparent
to me you bring....
so many things..
Apparent.
Beautiful, intrinsic , fatal beauty....
romantic flair volatile
amiss, your accuracy perfect, you miss nothing,
attraction at its finest...
I dare to say...
I must say...
your love is apparent to me, in all these days...
I am at a loss …
overwhelmed, moved beyond words...
your love draws, many things...
for this is apparent of your love...
to
my true love, Gabriel Velasquez-Mendizabel
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Copyright 2012 urbanhumility
Published on Wednesday, February 15, 2012.
Filed under:
"Poetry"
Comments on "Apparent..."
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On Saturday, April 15, 2023, sIo
(898) wrote:
My darling...
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On Tuesday, July 10, 2018, Jonas Robinson
(848) wrote:
Romance is generally not my thing, but I liked this one.
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On Tuesday, March 10, 2015, Spiritus_Frumenti
(340) wrote:
theres a vulnerability to these words. a certain "open wound" aspect to the choices of the words and the rhythm you used...missed your words old friend....
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A former member wrote:
I can see that glee in your words. Love can do many things.
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On Monday, December 8, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Beautiful piece! This emanated romance, respect and longing. Ciao, T/S
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On Thursday, May 15, 2014, sIo
(898) wrote:
Lucky lady.
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On Sunday, October 7, 2012, TaintedButterfly
(653) wrote:
Good God how I still adore you! This is so sweet, so inspiring, so heartfelt and longing... and so, YOU! Amazed still, I am. I miss you friend.
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On Thursday, February 16, 2012, veingo
(526) wrote:
There is a comfortable finalty to this. Like an acceptable end to the begining; making way for the begining of the rest.. It's been quite a while sinse I read your work. Well done.. ^V^
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On Wednesday, February 15, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
I'm sure she'll love it, thanks for sharing and welcome.