Apparent...

By urbanhumility

Apparent


 

to me you bring....

so many things..

Apparent.

Beautiful, intrinsic , fatal beauty....

romantic flair volatile


 

amiss, your accuracy perfect, you miss nothing,

attraction at its finest...


 

I dare to say...

I must say...

your love is apparent to me, in all these days...


 

I am at a loss …

overwhelmed, moved beyond words...


 

your love draws, many things...

for this is apparent of your love...























to my true love, Gabriel Velasquez-Mendizabel


 


 

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Copyright 2012 urbanhumility
Published on Wednesday, February 15, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • sIo On Saturday, April 15, 2023, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    My darling...

  • Jonas Robinson On Tuesday, July 10, 2018, Jonas Robinson (867)By person wrote:

    Romance is generally not my thing, but I liked this one.

  • Spiritus_Frumenti On Tuesday, March 10, 2015, Spiritus_Frumenti (341)By person wrote:

    theres a vulnerability to these words. a certain "open wound" aspect to the choices of the words and the rhythm you used...missed your words old friend....

  • A former member wrote: I can see that glee in your words. Love can do many things.

  • TropicalSnowstorm On Monday, December 8, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm (1703)By person wrote:

    Beautiful piece! This emanated romance, respect and longing. Ciao, T/S Scholar

  • sIo On Thursday, May 15, 2014, sIo (926)By person wrote:

    Lucky lady.

  • TaintedButterfly On Sunday, October 7, 2012, TaintedButterfly (670)By person wrote:

    Good God how I still adore you! This is so sweet, so inspiring, so heartfelt and longing... and so, YOU! Amazed still, I am. I miss you friend.

  • veingo On Thursday, February 16, 2012, veingo (532)By person wrote:

    There is a comfortable finalty to this. Like an acceptable end to the begining; making way for the begining of the rest.. It's been quite a while sinse I read your work. Well done.. ^V^

  • dwells On Wednesday, February 15, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    I'm sure she'll love it, thanks for sharing and welcome.

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