If Only
By Scarrzz
I have a beating heart
that must be made of silver
It feels so cold, and looks so black,
at least from the outside.
I know it isn't a heart of gold,
but I also know it isn't a heart of stone,
because I feel these
beatings
oh so deeply.
If only someone were to reach inside
to touch my very soul,
perhaps then the tarnish
would be taken away
and once again the light in my eyes would
sparkle.
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Copyright 2010 Scarrzz
Published on Wednesday, August 18, 2010.
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Comments on "If Only"
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A former member wrote:
I appreciated the raw, self-depreciating honesty of this piece, and that it ends on a hopefully note which offsets the negative. Great write, thank you!
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A former member wrote:
Awww... this was touching. Sweet and honest. =)
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On Wednesday, August 18, 2010, Malcholm Dark
(810) wrote:
wow, I like this piece... I have one suggestion, loose one of the if onlys.... well done here, thanks for sharing