If Only

By Scarrzz


I have a beating heart

that must be made of silver

 

It feels so cold, and looks so black,

 

at least from the outside.

 

I know it isn't a heart of gold,

but I also know it isn't a heart of stone,

 

because I feel these


beatings

 

oh so deeply.


 

If only someone were to reach inside

to touch my very soul,

 

perhaps then the tarnish

would be taken away

 

and once again the light in my eyes would


sparkle.

 

 

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Copyright 2010 Scarrzz
Published on Wednesday, August 18, 2010.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: I appreciated the raw, self-depreciating honesty of this piece, and that it ends on a hopefully note which offsets the negative. Great write, thank you!

  • A former member wrote: Awww... this was touching. Sweet and honest. =)

  • Malcholm Dark On Wednesday, August 18, 2010, Malcholm Dark (810)By person wrote:

    wow, I like this piece... I have one suggestion, loose one of the if onlys.... well done here, thanks for sharing


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