The Moment

By Scarrzz


This moment is all we will ever have
A foolish mistake born of urgent need
The pull is so strong when one finally finds his equal

Your beauty in that moment is forever burned into my memory
Even the thought makes it difficult to breathe

I released everything I had so that I could reach for you
And in so doing, released my honor and became unworthy of you

Only one moment of passion and hope
and a lifetime to know what will never be mine

But I will not forget the sound of your voice
as you told me, " I want you "

At once the most beautiful words I have ever heard
and the curse that condemned me forever



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Published on Wednesday, June 25, 2008.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • Jonas Robinson On Monday, February 25, 2019, Jonas Robinson (848)By person wrote:

    I like this. It definitely has a familiar ring and with quite a beautiful expression. :)

  • Scarrzz On Friday, August 11, 2017, Scarrzz (235)By person wrote:

    So, today marks ten years since "The Moment." Scholar

  • A former member wrote: ...it reminds me of the night it happened. he said he wanted to take a break, and that he will always remember our last night together. the words he spoke were so soft...this was a a poem i'll never forget Scholar

  • Sketso On Friday, June 27, 2008, Sketso (416)By person wrote:

    the redemptive curse always bleeds. nice response work.

  • Crush Room On Thursday, June 26, 2008, Crush Room (22)By person wrote:

    Actually, 6 reads later had to come back and say f***ing brilliant....

  • Crush Room On Thursday, June 26, 2008, Crush Room (22)By person wrote:

    This is brilliant....another fine example of 'feel the pleasure feel the pain.....' So articulate the thought process...love it xx

  • A former member wrote: I agree, and I'm very honoured that one of my pieces inspired you to write this.

  • Moonflower On Wednesday, June 25, 2008, Moonflower (298)By person wrote:

    wow. absolutely beautiful. i love this one :)


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