My Master Piece Of Lies
By GothicBlack
A master piece, of wants and lies
Bares nothing to truths meaning
Shadows loom over nightmare stares
A glaze of wanted fables divine
The forked tongues of heaven
Brings showers of obscurities
To life, the living heartbeats stagnant
To death, more gentle apparitions
Despair more convincing than
Forsaken dreams of last nights' tears
Upon violent skies, disdain does ride
Emotions uncaged, inraged, undefined
A pyre of cold, smoldering death
Burns spells upon my lips
Mystic rituals brand memories
Of sorrows, a lamenting requiem
Arcane lore discarded by time
Spellbound, necromantic chants
Ruins of forsaken silence
Lay grounded in my grave
With hope, to deaths grasp
In my tomb misery spreads
Like fire on feathered wings
That the faithless one brings
Despair floats upon the oceans of greed
As hope overturned, sinks far beneath
The crystal clear waters of crimson blood
Brings loathsome pain into my veins
Hope seems beyond my ability
And comprehension
Unto my end, i say good-night
As I rest forever more in depression
With a prayer upon my lips
Ripped away by loneliness
Scattered upon the cryptic skies
Lost within my master piece, my lies
Comments on "My Master Piece Of Lies"
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A former member wrote:
Exceptionally good. I have saved it, and would read it again and again hopefully, you won't mind..
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On Wednesday, January 12, 2011, DarkDruidess
(313) wrote:
Wonderful visuals....*bows*
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On Monday, October 30, 2006, beautifulfallenangel
(62) wrote:
beauty ridden, afraid to tell of the truth, for all i know are the lies........... IDK.... just said it...love it though
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A former member wrote:
dark and spiritual. I am already in love with your work ~ truly inspired and well constructed.
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On Friday, November 18, 2005, Ravenblade
(307) wrote:
I am incredibly jealous of your way with words, and completely in awe of this piece. It was amazing from beginning to end, I didn't want to stop reading, and I didn't want it to end>Raven
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A former member wrote:
This is sensational, "a prayer...cryptic skies": wow! The imagery is so clearly expressed and yet so deeply moving and tortured, the rhyme and smooth blend of words is stunning. Beautiful!
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A former member wrote:
Goodness...I just...wow...there truly are no words that I could even attempt to utter that would explain in the detail you deserve just how greatly this hit me...the best I can do is this:
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A former member wrote:
You have taken my punctured heart (yes, the one you punctured with needled words) in your artisticly molded hands and thrown the blazing thing of wax as far as you can. Beautiful. *Evangel*
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, urbanhumility
(1158) wrote:
fucking brilliant!!........your words are poetry incarnate!...........truly you were inspired.............you have my admiration...............urban
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On Monday, November 7, 2005, manywalks
(747) wrote:
Each stanza could stand alone, together they are simply brilliant. ~ wen