my minds eye

By Crush Room





It is here that I can only dream of his weathered hands
falling into shape around my supple breasts
as they awaken to his attention.

And my hips curving into him as he
ceremoniously maps his course
with a gentle, yet discerning eye.

And I can only dream that the small of my back
will hollow and deepen to the softness
of his breath enhaling the scent of me.

And as he draws in my frame, I can only dream
of a divine natural affinity between us exisiting as
an illuminating embrace.

To dream of a place where I can hear him exhale
his contentment without fear, while his eyes speak
a sacred language before this time I've not heard......


.....only exists in my mind.

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© 2008 Crush Room
Published on Monday, September 29, 2008.     Filed under: "Personal" and "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: mmhhh...this is one of the best pieces i have read...its more than words...like a sight at feeling...laid bare

  • PoetessDarkly On Sunday, November 25, 2012, PoetessDarkly (693)By person wrote:

    lovely imagery deserving of the poetry of the day.

  • A former member wrote: I love the flow of this poem. It's such an easy read. And your word choice is just the cherry on top! Keep up the good work!

  • Devilish On Sunday, November 25, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Beautiful. congrats on POD.. Scholar

  • Scarrzz On Friday, October 17, 2008, Scarrzz (235)By person wrote:

    Unity . . .What you describe here is Unity - the give and take between two bodies and two souls. It also calls to mind the unity between sex and love. Sex without love desecrates the importance of that bond. I like this because what you desire to give is a good thing. It is painful to not be able to give it, but at least you understand it. Since you know the picture, maybe you will find what you are looking for. I hope your dreams become reality. Scholar

  • Crush Room On Tuesday, October 21, 2008, Crush Room (22)By person wrote:

    Thank you....it is a good thing, and hope lives on....either way, Ill be ok..xx

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