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digging a hole
By denver nitze
i don't know how to say this
a nd i'm not sure what to do
m y everyness is fading
d ays go like tornadoes
y ou'll never know it took me
i want to do it alone
n asty words to chase you
g o now, my days are done.
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© 2008 denver nitze
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On Thursday, June 19, 2008, Aleas
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wrote:
It's hard to imagine how difficult writing like that is, to make a word or phrase with the first letter of each line AND have it not sound forced and flow like natural conversation.
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A former member wrote:
and now im crying *huggles* im sorry. so very sorry
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On Wednesday, June 18, 2008, NikesRain
(1298) wrote:
should i be selfish and scream and rant how unfair it is... if i could get past the trembling in my hands and the way the tears choke my words off i would... yeah... i would be that selfish because i'd really rather the nastiness go and you stay
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2008, Rebel tiGer King
(258) wrote:
Cant....i dont know what to say except we all love you here, know you are appreciated my dear -symph-
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2008, denver nitze
(256) wrote:
don't cry for me dark poets. i'll be okay. only in death can we truly be free. thank you for your love and support over the years, it has helped keep me here longer than i would have without your love. you all inspire me in so many ways and i am so glad i found you all here. keep the faith alive and know that this won't be the last of me. i'll be back in some form or another and i'll be better than i was this time around. thank you again for your love and support. everyday is a challenge and everyday is wonderful. thanks to great friends and people like ya'all. :D THANK YOU DARK POET"S!!!! much love forever. peace love and harmonies... ~ta~
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2008, Alanarchy
(1200) wrote:
:(
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(359) wrote:
*sighs and hugs TA*
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On Tuesday, June 17, 2008, Dancing_Monkey
(1246) wrote:
I am so sorry.
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