We would starve, before.

By LadyMalice

When I awoke,
I couldn't remember
any time before this.
White washed
and streaming live, the
transparency of reality
was lifted from my eyes,
quiet and insecure,
your hands resting
against mine,
fingers slipping,
reaching, for a dream.

Strange silence trickled
through the winding corridors
of veins and capillaries
that wanted to connect,
grow, mutate,
fuck.

My words evolved
in your mouth, confusing
and riddled with
subliminal messages,
pressed against your lips,
and starving
for a little stability.

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© 2008 LadyMalice
Published on Thursday, January 24, 2008.     Filed under: "Love" and "Poetry"
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  • RubyXero On Friday, January 25, 2008, RubyXero (481)By person wrote:

    ooo...especially that last stanza. i liked.

  • Narcissa On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Narcissa (391)By person wrote:

    I agree w/yru1, I love the last few lines....wonderful write.

  • denver nitze On Thursday, January 24, 2008, denver nitze (251)By person wrote:

    mouth candy. nice rythmm. very sensual and hot. spicy mouth candy... i'll be in the bathroom ;).

  • A former member wrote: Excellent! The last two lines are my favorites. Very well done.

  • Alanarchy On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    Fucking Killer. Those first three lines were simply classic. Honest, and intimate without getting too simple. Very sexy. Write on.

  • Niemand On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Niemand (355)By person wrote:

    Amazing!-Gin

  • Revisable Retina On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Revisable Retina (81)By person wrote:

    *loves reading your poetry* -R

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