We would starve, before.
By LadyMalice
When I awoke,
I couldn't remember
any time before this.
White washed
and streaming live, the
transparency of reality
was lifted from my eyes,
quiet and insecure,
your hands resting
against mine,
fingers slipping,
reaching, for a dream.
Strange silence trickled
through the winding corridors
of veins and capillaries
that wanted to connect,
grow, mutate,
fuck.
My words evolved
in your mouth, confusing
and riddled with
subliminal messages,
pressed against your lips,
and starving
for a little stability.
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© 2008 LadyMalice
Comments on "We would starve, before."
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On Friday, January 25, 2008, RubyXero
(481) wrote:
ooo...especially that last stanza. i liked.
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On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Narcissa
(391) wrote:
I agree w/yru1, I love the last few lines....wonderful write.
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On Thursday, January 24, 2008, denver nitze
(251) wrote:
mouth candy. nice rythmm. very sensual and hot. spicy mouth candy... i'll be in the bathroom ;).
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A former member wrote:
Excellent! The last two lines are my favorites. Very well done.
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On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Alanarchy
(1168) wrote:
Fucking Killer. Those first three lines were simply classic. Honest, and intimate without getting too simple. Very sexy. Write on.
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On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Niemand
(355) wrote:
Amazing!-Gin
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On Thursday, January 24, 2008, Revisable Retina
(81) wrote:
*loves reading your poetry* -R