Strangle
By Disassembly Boy
The blood and the glass,
And the way it tasted after you kissed me,
I can’t forget those things.
Every memory, constrained and blue;
You’d wrap your veins around my throat
Until I felt your heartbeat..
Until you'd choke the life out of me.
Cos loving you meant losing oxygen.
Taped mouths
And lungs collapsing.
You never wanted me to forget
That time was running out;
That we were wearing down..
…And I couldn’t leave;
That you were losing your grip,
And I still couldn’t breathe.
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© 2007 Disassembly Boy Kevin N.
Published on Thursday, June 21, 2007.
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On Wednesday, October 12, 2016, 10 Forty Three
(543) wrote:
I love the imagery and the gruesome yet tragedy in all your poems. Well done. - 10:43
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A former member wrote:
Beautiful!
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On Monday, August 4, 2014, TropicalSnowstorm
(1580) wrote:
Fantastic piece! This had an ominous feel to it, with creative imagery throughout...I am glad I came across this one! Ciao, T/S
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On Tuesday, July 3, 2007, carlosjackal
(2787) wrote:
What twisted love you describe!! The metaphor of this piece was fucking ace and written perfectly. Write the fuck on =) -Carl
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On Saturday, June 23, 2007, Tania
(192) wrote:
you captured loves choke-hold perfectly.love it.
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, LadyMalice
(18) wrote:
I love the intensity in this. Nice work.
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, mywristshurt
(405) wrote:
this was emotional for me because i could feel someone taking my throat and grasping me.. and it hurts.. great write, keep it up, you have talent
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On Thursday, June 21, 2007, Bella Butchery
(696) wrote:
your words are like walking across needles, or rain evaporated formaldehyde..... they kill me every time.