Faded

By Tania

Your memory is fading.. This constant revere.. it slowly slides away…
Like a flashing neon light that’s just about
to diffuse… it struggles to flicker..
but after a while.. it just stops.
and as the night sky still shines black..
I look to the stars..
I see your face…
It looks so far away now…
Traces of your smile still grace the skyline..
And it enlightens my heart..
But only for a while..
As the wind blows.. things change..
Emotions they slip away..
like the final tear falling to its ultimate death..
I wipe it slowly from my face
Watching it slowly elapse...
Like closing the pages to
An over and done
chapter.. your
memory.. I
just let
it go..
.

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© 2007 Tania
Published on Wednesday, February 14, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • Sketso On Sunday, August 26, 2007, Sketso (454)By person wrote:

    Well done... I can relate. Isn't odd how even the memories we don't want to let go of eventually fade?

  • Six-Out On Sunday, June 10, 2007, Six-Out (1481)By person wrote:

    that ending was torment in text. I loved this piece, and I think i need to erad more of your stuff.

  • A former member wrote: This puts a picture in my head of you saying this piece while your sitting on the beach somewhere looking at the colors of the sunset on the ever moving ocean... I love this......... __josh__

  • Vilification On Tuesday, March 6, 2007, Vilification (20)By person wrote:

    i agree with anna in the fact that this was beautifully done i enjoyed the read...

  • DarkLord On Monday, February 26, 2007, DarkLord (7)By person wrote:

    Very emotional, I like this...

  • A former member wrote: damn, i really enjoyed this..sort of breathy and capturing, a reverent breath clinging to a soft sort of love. you should write in this style more, it really works for you. beautifully done.

  • Disassembly Boy On Friday, February 16, 2007, Disassembly Boy (61)By person wrote:

    Beautifully written, and I love the imagery.. :)

  • A former member wrote: definately one of my favs from you so far. nicely done as always. ~ red.

  • Tania On Friday, February 16, 2007, Tania (197)By person wrote:

    aww shucks! ;)

  • Bella Butchery On Thursday, February 15, 2007, Bella Butchery (734)By person wrote:

    art is deeply personal and reflects yourself. unique like fingerprints or snowflakes, you have a certain grace, an elegance to your style. have more faith in yourself, this was passionate and delecate. superb :)

  • A former member wrote: God this was wonderful. Well done.

  • Mistress Shadow On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, Mistress Shadow (252)By person wrote:

    You chose your words in such a way that tragedy seeps in between them. Well done. ~T

  • prettydisgrace On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, prettydisgrace (96)By person wrote:

    wonderful write tania.you really know how to capture emotion.pleasent read.

  • LOKI On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, LOKI (169)By person wrote:

    Very nice I like the closure in the end.I just let it go.Good finishing lines

  • Mylissa On Wednesday, February 14, 2007, Mylissa (853)By person wrote:

    I think the ending wraps this piece up perfectly. it is crushing, yet powerful. Wonderful write.

  • A former member wrote: this is very insightful -quite soothing in a plaintive sort of way -some great lines.

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