it's all in the way [she spits heartache]

By Six-Out




it's the way stars work down her arms.
like the smoke rings of saturn above her head.
when the room is that jazzy blue
and she's coughing up emotion from the nicotine
fix. she's a vixen fixed on just.
living.

and it's in the way the words seep from her skin.
lips licking pretense. and my ears are begging.
she's something kin to penning roadside fires- and singing
heartscripts. it's all nonsense in that perfect way.
like the locked lips the steel strings.
hold the key to.

and it's the way she tosses her heart at the wall.
graffiti artist. speaking in colors- spraying her soul
onto the night. and I can taste the bitterness on my tongue.
like an ashtray turned upside down. she's trapped.
and I can speak in soft silhouettes. trace the imprint.
she screams like lightposts. and I can taste her repentance.
she smiles like innocence.

and it's like the way her words tap dance on my finger tips.
while I beg. there _has to be more than this. we're lost.
and she's dropping bombs on the bass- I tremble
every time her lips let loose a bullet meant for my forehead.
and I shake. she's dripping candle wax from her tongue and
screaming to light it on fire and melt away the shame
two shots
and my throat burns.

and it's in the way her sounds cry me to sleep.
I'm standing on footprints. and she's beckoning. dream.
like the sound of broken souls and empty glasses.
it's hard to see it as anything but tragic. but her sorrow
leaps like skin tones. tasting dissonance.
stillborn static. and I'm star crossed. locking moments
like a rush of habit.

and it's in the way. she makes it
heart.bent on breaking promises. and she sings.
I close my eyes. and I _feel.



and this.
it's the only way.

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© 2007 Jon Rodgers
Published on Tuesday, September 25, 2007.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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Comments on "it's all in the way [she spits heartache]"

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  • KittyStryker On Monday, October 8, 2007, KittyStryker (710)By person wrote:

    Aww, are you all squishy in love or some shit? ::grin::

  • A former member wrote: wow, i had images in my mind. vivid images and sound. i love. *bows*

  • asphyxia On Saturday, September 29, 2007, asphyxia (56)By person wrote:

    *bows down to your magnificence*

  • PoeticHellion On Saturday, September 29, 2007, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    and you're back with a new vengeance.

  • PoeticHellion On Saturday, September 29, 2007, PoeticHellion (191)By person wrote:

    and you're back with a new vengeance.

  • glasshouse On Saturday, September 29, 2007, glasshouse (530)By person wrote:

    Beautiful. Triumphant return and all that bull shit. This was really great, it pulled me a long. It seemed so matter of fact but the facts were so elegant. I'll have to come back and re read. and you bet your ass, I will. --Jes

  • A former member wrote: *boom* You're back. ;)

  • A former member wrote: Vivid and beautiful. She seems like a wonderland of hope and tragedy. ....-Samone

  • blue On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    I'll not read anything more today. The only fault I could find in this is: "she's something kin to penning" I think it should be "something 'akin' to.." Other than that, you rock for a silly texmex. ~b

  • Six-Out On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, Six-Out (1423)By person wrote:

    I meant for it to be more of a relationship of blood, rather than similarities. ;)

  • blue On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, blue (1409)By person wrote:

    ok, I lied, I did read something else. So sue my taco destroying ass.

  • verablue On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, verablue (106)By person wrote:

    "but her sorrow leaps like skin tones. tasting dissonance. stillborn static. and I'm star crossed. locking moments like a rush of habit." that part gave me tingles....amazing.

  • Rachel On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, Rachel (210)By person wrote:

    You make people beautiful with your words. If only they could hold up their end of the bargain...

  • Rachel On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, Rachel (210)By person wrote:

    I've come to the realization I'll always be addicted to your words. I'm quite alright with that.

  • swing_the_hammer On Wednesday, September 26, 2007, swing_the_hammer (48)By person wrote:

    speechless...L


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