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Plaster Casts.
By Mute Serenade
Through the glow, the individuality of one
Has sent them all astray..
The warmth beneath you lilac visions and haloed head
Brings comfort to some
And chaos to others
For in exception you burn
And let yourself alone.
Through the glow, the individuality of you
You willingly become the scapegoat
The hate beneath their eyes of rage and callous words
Brings assurance to some
And tears to others
for, in exception, they want you to burn
And Let you all alone.
Through the glow, your individuality's tried
But alas you surely fail
The delicacy beneath your dashed vision and low hung head
Brings remorse to some
Defeat to others
For in exception you're feared
So they left you all alone.
Through the glow, your individuality's left behind
As they finally understand
The sympathy beneath contempt and remorse for what is done
Brings disillusion to some
Disarray to others
In exception, You're remembered
Or you would have never been alone...
Plaster Casts of Perfection...
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Copyright 2004 Mute Serenade
Published on Tuesday, February 10, 2004.
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On Friday, February 15, 2019, Jonas Robinson
(867)
wrote:
Good stuff. :)
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A former member wrote:
Powerful and Insightful delivery. Brilliant lines weaved here as always.
A raised glass of fine poetry.
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On Saturday, September 16, 2017, TropicalSnowstorm
(1703) wrote:
Wow...thought provoking and wonderfully put together with just enough left for the reader to fill in that it will speak to their own interpretations very well. For me, this seemed like a religious piece, but I think there are many many things you have left this open to be to someone. Love it! Ciao, T/S
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On Sunday, November 27, 2016, Magdalena
(614) wrote:
This is so sad, because it is plastered with truth. Absolutely excellent writing.
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On Thursday, March 10, 2005, jaunty pill
(47) wrote:
The including of certain words and detail here , Made this one as breathtaking as I had hoped. When I read this , I not only felt it , I breathed in its wisdom. Remarkable.
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On Wednesday, November 24, 2004, blue
(1454) wrote:
bzzz.. that gave me chills~~~ 'exceptional' work!! A+
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On Tuesday, November 30, 2004, blue
(1454) wrote:
bzzz...again I'm buzzing! HARDCORE! Your insight is something on it's own, but to express it this perfectly is truly admirable. :) ~favs list~ thank you oh so much! Brian
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On Saturday, May 22, 2004, sixsixnine
(477) wrote:
haha! this shit rocked hard* trippy as FUCK* realistic very philisophical * metophorical you know just fucking cool*669*
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On Thursday, May 20, 2004, aXe FactoR
(335) wrote:
the flow of this poem...all i can say is...wow...it flows so smoothly. awesome write. :)
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On Thursday, March 25, 2004, hate_doll
(265) wrote:
ah yes, all in the eye of the beholder...stunning work here, dear...brava
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On Sunday, February 22, 2004, Lemons
(46) wrote:
::discos::
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On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, The Fallen Angel
(235) wrote:
being in the spot light will give many acquaintences, more enemies and less friends...i don't think many would pity but the downfalls of one are remember most than anything+Fallen One+
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On Wednesday, February 18, 2004, _Andrew_
(245) wrote:
very deep and forward. this piece i find is very misleading but it does come together. i like how you used to some/to others. the comparison was a nice touch. i enjoyed hwo though prevoking this was. nice work
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On Tuesday, February 10, 2004, capt_funguy
(778) wrote:
jesus christ , i don't get it , but i like it - seriously , very cool piece - superior structure - funguy
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