Day of my babies Death

By AshtrayDirt

Please don't, mommy
just let me sleep inside.

I will always scream,
You will never sleep.

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Copyright 2003 AshtrayDirt
Published on Tuesday, July 8, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • carlosjackal On Thursday, March 15, 2018, carlosjackal (2788)By person wrote:

    A stone cold killer of a piece to chill the blood and haunt the soul.

  • xserratedsoulx On Wednesday, January 16, 2008, xserratedsoulx (212)By person wrote:

    oh.my.god.i am chilled forever.

  • Moonflower On Sunday, June 10, 2007, Moonflower (298)By person wrote:

    utterly haunting.

  • Sticky Kitty On Monday, July 11, 2005, Sticky Kitty (241)By person wrote:

    oh dear. poor lovely. -kitty

  • Malice In Wonderland On Saturday, January 22, 2005, Malice In Wonderland (976)By person wrote:

    oh Christ.... Scholar

  • A former member wrote: utterly speechless..... Scholar

  • BeautifulCalamity On Friday, October 8, 2004, BeautifulCalamity (428)By person wrote:

    i get abortion out of this,well written... left me wondering about the guilt i'd feel.. large impact for such few words

  • Mute Serenade On Monday, May 17, 2004, Mute Serenade (389)By person wrote:

    ...gasp... you have left me wordless... this wins... Sue

  • A former member wrote: Ow, such pain can be felt =( ~Razor

  • A former member wrote: Man I felt this one...so blunt and painful

  • Stranger On Friday, August 15, 2003, Stranger (263)By person wrote:

    The echo of death that never dies. I am sorry for your pain.

  • Demosthenes On Saturday, July 12, 2003, Demosthenes (155)By person wrote:

    whoa. i think i kinda get it... but still... its really stabbing. -B

  • A former member wrote: whew... this is really really powerful despite how short it is. its about abortion right?

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