Comments by dwells

"Those who soar highest, fall hardest (just read something similar in a Corinthian poem). Hoping that this was cathartic and you can now turn around in the saddle and dig those spurs in deeply!"
Posted by dwells on "Peace Treaty" by Sean Mc Shane

"One of your best and perhaps most despondent, drop me a line and we'll talk, or not - cheers laddie!"
Posted by dwells on "Glorious Hell" by Sean Mc Shane

"Welcome back, you have been greatly missed, and reprising many of your old titles was quite an inspiration. We all live on the same roller coaster, just in different cars, thanks Sean!"
Posted by dwells on "Return to Memory Lane" by Sean Mc Shane

"The sleep of serenity only comes when the world bears less on our weary shoulders - whenever that may be. Meanwhile, endeavor to perservere lad, cheers to you!"
Posted by dwells on "Too Dark to Sleep" by Sean Mc Shane

"My darlings are more precious than your darlings! But then maybe that could just be me too? The characters can break down when age takes its toll, and the old become fearful of the Glorious End, or also if too frail to shoulder burdens. Much enjoyed the positive message in summation - cheers pal!"
Posted by dwells on "Kill Your Darlings" by Sean Mc Shane

"Sounds like a tough crowd! I told my wife today that I should read some of my poetry at the retirement home that we just moved her mom into yesterday. It would be a welcome break from the show tunes that are always being sung by the Broadway wannbees, circa 1960. Wifey told me I only had about 8 in my repetoire of 300+ that might be suitable. Oh well, let's just relax and hear another rendition of "Mame". This was great Sean, sorry for the soliloquy, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Open Mic" by Sean Mc Shane

"Very romantic and some really memorable stanzas. I'm sure this will put you in her good graces for sure. Sounds like your world is presently splendid, enjoy and cheers!"
Posted by dwells on " Bliss of You " by Sean Mc Shane

"Eh Sean, tell Robyn that Gary is the snail on Sponge Bob! This was enchanting and delightful with just the right touch of luminosity, cheers you old softie!"
Posted by dwells on "Magic Word" by Sean Mc Shane

"This was truly an epicurean work of art and zero calories too, cheers and hope your ears aren't sore tomorrow!"
Posted by dwells on "Kissin' Paradise" by Sean Mc Shane

"Much enjoyed this journey into the Outer Limits and still pondering some of the protagonists, always a trip and find a lead shield for that kryptonite! Cheers. "
Posted by dwells on " Star Drama" by Sean Mc Shane

"Older and wiser and a sad tale you tell. Some people love to wallow in self-inflicted misery, if you slip up momentarily, in keeping them constantly amused. This brought back memories, cheers mate!"
Posted by dwells on "Thresholds" by Sean Mc Shane

"Curious piece that had me riveted to a surprise ending, not completely unexpected. Well-crafted and wholly original. By the way, what is the caliber of God's Gun and does he use hollow points like the 2 million more rounds that Homeland Security just ordered to keep us in line? But I digress - cheers Sean!"
Posted by dwells on "Back in the Shadow Again" by Sean Mc Shane

"Go for it! and then tell them they can always remind you "I told you so" later. Nothing ventured...Cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "The Burn in Concern" by Sean Mc Shane

"YES! times 10, how did I miss this one, bravo!"
Posted by dwells on " Dev" by Sean Mc Shane

"Liked the confusion over place and face, quite a good gimmick! Also in the early part of this "Gloria" (the song, or Estefan" (HA!). Cheers pal and this was just what I needed, thanks for the therapy, now get some sleepytime."
Posted by dwells on "Wake Up Call" by Sean Mc Shane

"Sorry I missed this one and sounds like your poised for another swan dive maybe? Extremely well done and totally engrossing, thanks Sean"
Posted by dwells on "Destiny's End" by Sean Mc Shane

"How about some pictures? (HA!) - seriously dude, next thing we know you'll be changing your profile too! BUT, our loss is her gain and your happiness is ours too, well done laddie!"
Posted by dwells on "Babydoll in Blue" by Sean Mc Shane

"Don't despair because the pendulum swings both ways, enjoy the extremes and I'll wave in passing by on my own rollercoaster, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "Horribly Beautiful" by Sean Mc Shane

"A loaf of bread, a jug of wine, and thou...perfect you two, can I be the best man (HA)! Seriously, this was amazing, cheers!"
Posted by dwells on "" Honey Glide " with Labella Blue" by Sean Mc Shane

"Lovers doomed from the start perhaps, sorry I missed this one a few days ago. Some stark and uniquely riveting images, well done Sean! "
Posted by dwells on "Black Door" by Sean Mc Shane

"DEfinitely true love personified on a very different plane, Bonnie and Clydish almost, except she plugged him by mistake. Can't call that bullet back - great piece SEan, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Next Time" by Sean Mc Shane

"Black Flag is great on roaches but don't recommend huffing it (HA)! Another cryptic yet revelatory submission that turns on the head of pin perhaps. Much enjoyed and still pondering bro, thanks."
Posted by dwells on "Strain of Thought" by Sean Mc Shane

"Bastardom - genius! Really enjoyed this sad tale of two people perhaps who shared much but were doomed from the start and now share a one-sided secret maybe? This was great and I can relate. Thanks man."
Posted by dwells on "Truth of the Night" by Sean Mc Shane

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