The Burn in Concern
By Sean Mc Shane
It's just a dream, they scream
always gettin' in my face
'n who
are they, to even say
it's all way outta place
They say this
deal, it ain't real
and it's time I just let it go
" there's
no buffer, you're gonna suffer
how can you not fuckin' know ?"
I hear that, and I fear that
'n all these other points they
make
But I feel it, they try 'n steal it
all dreams die when
you awake
You'll never face her, just erase her
you're
better off on your own
you're not her hero, the score is zero
you're
still pretty much alone
"we wanna save ya, before it enslaves
ya
it's all just outta concern "
well I apprechiate it,
but I hate it
and now it's my fuckin' turn
hear my voice,
this is my choice
this is my fuckin' life to live
for now we're
fine, on-line
save it - cuz I no longer give
cuz this
love, is high above
it made me a true believer
I'd rather die,
than make her cry
and that's while I'll never leave her
Baby
you heard, my word
that I'd never just go away
trust me Baby,
there is no maybe
cuz we're already on our way . . .
Author's Note:
Sometimes friends and family just don't know when to FUCK OFF !!Comments on "The Burn in Concern"
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A former member wrote:
This is heartfelt...always go with your heart no matter what anyone else says... you know yourself better than anyone just do what makes you happy, fuck everybody else! Thanks for the read!
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On Friday, September 7, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks Heartache, Yeah some people just don't get it. Thanks for the cool comments. Til next time -
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On Wednesday, August 29, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
WOW! Hell yeah . Take claim baby. It's yours no one elses!!! Fuck em and feed em fish! They don't know when to fuck off; and truth be told the only time they fel the need to get involved like they care is when they see you happy. Change is a scary thing to the ones that hold no power over choices. Like I tell every mutha fucker that comes at me with some bullshit "If you ain't fucking me or paying my bills find a toy to play with!" Your a solid man and a good man and you deserve to be happy and i'm proud of you sean.. Much love and respect sir.. I got an email you posted I couldn't get here fast enough.,. lol. I will always be here for you and support your every decision.
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On Wednesday, August 29, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
WOW, Dev, I'm really blown the fuck away here. You're so right on about everything, and the comps ya gave me, wow again. Seriously, that was very heartfelt and touching all the way. Thanks again. Til next time -
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On Wednesday, August 29, 2012, DarkAsh
(45) wrote:
Nice rockin' flow, felt like lyrics to a song. Had me tappin' my foot.
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On Wednesday, August 29, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, Darkash. Kings of Leon - Crawl, variation was goin' thru my mind when I wrote it. Thanks again. Later -
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On Tuesday, August 28, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...stick to your guns, man, gotta be true to your heart...
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On Wednesday, August 29, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, 'Blues. I think I'm gonna start pullin' guns. That usually shuts people up. Cool. Later -
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On Tuesday, August 28, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Go for it! and then tell them they can always remind you "I told you so" later. Nothing ventured...Cheers!
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On Wednesday, August 29, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, d. Sometimes that works, not with the windbags though. They are entertaining in a way. Cool. Later -
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On Tuesday, August 28, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
I feel you Sean, it's hard for people who can't imagine the connection 2 people can make without seeing each other physically on a daily basis. The physical is nice, but there is so much more, many more levels that can be way more fulfilling especially after years of neglecting those levels. Stay true to your heart and mind, that's where the truth lies - XXOO
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On Wednesday, August 29, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, Robyn. You hit the nail on the head. Cool. Til next time -