Bliss of You

By Sean Mc Shane


Whisper on the eve's gentle winds
                 when You wish to set sail this night
for the unseen stars in Our ocean of time
                 where we often take Our fancy flights
into the 7 Seas of Our endless nights
                 standing on the Castle Isle of pastel mists
in the Golden Chambers of all Our works
                  where a goddess of Love blessed Our first kiss
thru the swirls of deep devotion
                  under the Emerald Archway of sweet mystery
Forever's Blue Light chronicles the origins
                  of the Greatest Romance in any known history  ;) 
safe from the agents of ancient misery
                  who no longer find their way to Our Hearts
everytime we say Our names
                  another old haunting shadow soon departs
mastering the ways of Love's erotic arts
                   the overwhelming joy of being One with You
on a floating cloud of glorious desires
                  I marvel at the purity of all that is True

as I bathe in the everflowing bliss of  You . . .  




























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Copyright 2012 Sean Mc Shane
Published on Thursday, October 18, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Man, if I had a nickel for everytime I said ' Our ' . . . I'd have . . . 35 cents
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  • dwells On Monday, October 22, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Very romantic and some really memorable stanzas. I'm sure this will put you in her good graces for sure. Sounds like your world is presently splendid, enjoy and cheers!

  • Sean Mc Shane On Monday, October 22, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks d, and you are right on a both counts. Thanks again, man. Later-

  • Devilish On Saturday, October 20, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Oh my fucking god. sean mc shane well the name speaks for its self but wow. now i know exactly what people mean when they say this is a totally different side of you devil but i like it. i never wanna seem soft. but this is a totally different side of you and it is far from soft.. it's i dont even know .. a force to be reckoned sir. your a movement by your self .. Bows Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Sunday, October 21, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks Dev, you know that means a lot to me when I get such high praise from you. Yeah it is a much different side, so old it feels brand new, if that makes any sense. Thanks again for such awesome comments. Too cool. Til next time -

  • Nehema On Saturday, October 20, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    Every woman deserves such a romantic write. Yours is a lucky one indeed - XXOO Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Saturday, October 20, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks Robyn, and yes you gals do, a lot more than you get. And I know I'm a lucky one for sure. Thanks again. Til next time -

  • FadedBlues On Friday, October 19, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...very romantic, Sean. the gentle, passionate side of an Outlaw Poet...

  • Sean Mc Shane On Saturday, October 20, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    That's an awesome compliment 'Blues. Way cool. Later -

  • haunted On Friday, October 19, 2012, haunted (837)By person wrote:

    very cool sean...very enchanting and dreamy! i loved it. awesome!

  • Sean Mc Shane On Saturday, October 20, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks Haunted, I apprechiate that. That's cool. Later -

  • BlackVelvet Rose On Thursday, October 18, 2012, BlackVelvet Rose (175)By person wrote:

    This is absolutely beautiful Sean. I love this and it is bookmarked for sure. Thank you for sharing! Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Saturday, October 20, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks Lilith, I'm rally glad ya like it. And thanks for the b-mark, too. Way cool. Til next time -


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