Open Mic
By Sean Mc Shane
Standing in side shadows, I was given my cue, when the guitarist played
an acoustic version of Gloria, slow, with the chords kinda frayed
as I swayed, swaggered and strutted into the dim spotlight of the stage
tellin' myself I'm just an organic prison of wicked words, time to
open the cage
with rage to push it all out and time to thank God
I'm this wasted
there's a punk chaos in the air, hangin' thick, I
can't wait to taste it
from another pasted audience, so diverse, both
good and bad
elements of dark daydreams and wet nightmares that drove
me mad
and sad, like so many Song-Babes before her, Gloria was dragged
out
when she slowly spreads her melodic legs, again, to carry the
words I shout
to the semi-settled spectating freak shows, a strange
silence seemed to hold them
when I grabbed the mic like a bottle and
gave no warning when I told them . . .
" Gloria's not comin'. . .
another
dark discovery
with no recovery
nothing to say
just fade away
questions will come
most of them dumb
playin' me out
leave it in doubt
damaged and dark
I'm
on my mark
get ready - get set
choke on regret
wonderful mystery
forged history
crash 'n burn
live 'n never learn
I said she's not comin' . . . "
The guitarist wound down as
the audience rose up in a roar and did their thing
I was pelted with
beer cans, food and whatever else the back rows could fling
the
front rows sprayed me with various liquids and launched a barrage of spit
standin' there covered in their trash and noise knowing . . . they
really dig my shit
Author's Note:
well, it's better than the poem about toenail clippingsAwards
Comments on "Open Mic"
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
...that is a dangerous room. you're lucky those zombies didn't have a taste for marinated Poet...
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks 'Blues, and yeah a punk audience is definitely it's own entity. If you're covered in spit by the end of whatever ya did, you did it well. Cool. Later -
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
Sounds like a tough crowd! I told my wife today that I should read some of my poetry at the retirement home that we just moved her mom into yesterday. It would be a welcome break from the show tunes that are always being sung by the Broadway wannbees, circa 1960. Wifey told me I only had about 8 in my repetoire of 300+ that might be suitable. Oh well, let's just relax and hear another rendition of "Mame". This was great Sean, sorry for the soliloquy, cheers!
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks d, and if I were you I'd take the other 282 works down there and cut loose. Nothin' better than a senior riot. It's like watching a real one, but in super slow mo. Cool. Later -
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On Friday, November 2, 2012, Alchemist
(679) wrote:
Great write bro and hopefully Dev isn't a tease I'm gonna meet up with her one day and make her own up to all her kinky talk.
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks Al, I'm glad ya like the write. And yes, that thought's crossed my mind too. Cool. Thanks again. Later -
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On Friday, November 2, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
We could meet up now shawn.. if you could handle it.
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On Friday, November 2, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
Lmfao.. i fucking love you . Thank you.. I logged in just for you. you are always worth it. lol .. oh i love you . can we meet for brunch and spiked punch then fuck like wild dogs on a massive hunt to get off.. YES! lol.
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks Dev, and holy shit. Always such cool compliments and wickedly wonderful . . . offers. Too cool. Til next time -
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On Friday, November 2, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
LMFAO Sean - I love you. That made my night, thank you thank you THANK YOU! - XXOO
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On Saturday, November 3, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks Robyn, I'm glad ya liked it . And I'm glad I made your night. Swwet. Til next time -