Dev

By Sean Mc Shane

When I first arrived,
            I was welcomed with open arms
Given high praise for my works
            and comments with such wicked charm

I was curious to know more
            about this mysterious angelic devil
Thru her works she took me places
            some on a very dark level

Which made me admire even more
            how so very strong it all has made her
that's why she's always victorious
             over all the jealous fools that hate her

But there's more love than hate
             ask anyone she calls a friend
or when a someone's viciously attacked
             she's always right there to defend

She always makes me laugh
              sometimes a little bit sad
and when they call her names
              I can't help but to get mad

She's done a lot for the new
             she's done a lot for me as well
and some of her comments
             have made parts of me swell

I can't say enough about her
             I could go on and on forev
So I'll just cut it short like I did that word
            and say Happy Birthday Dev !!!!



























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Copyright 2012 Sean Mc Shane
Published on Wednesday, July 18, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

Happy birthday Dev
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  • dwells On Monday, July 23, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    YES! times 10, how did I miss this one, bravo!

  • FadedBlues On Friday, July 20, 2012, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    ...nice 1, Sean. she'll remember this birthday forev...

  • Maladroit On Wednesday, July 18, 2012, Maladroit (202)By person wrote:

    I too fell in love, as soon as she said, "Well... Who the fuck are you?" :)

  • Nehema On Thursday, July 19, 2012, Nehema (960)By person wrote:

    LMFAO - that just sums up all her charm... ;) This might be my favorite comment EVER!! Scholar

  • Devilish On Wednesday, July 18, 2012, Devilish (2658)By person wrote:

    Oh my god sean. Robyn told me to log on you had wrote something so like a dog in heat I rushed to get here almost locking myself out of my account for an hour. lmao. I love you so much and appreciate you with all my heart. All the attention has left me a lil hidden, i'm very shy believe it or not. This means alot to me I don't know what to say. I can't see the fuckkind screen cause i'm cryib so i better go i lvoe you. Scholar

  • Nehema On Wednesday, July 18, 2012, Nehema (960)By person wrote:

    An honestly truthful and worthy tribute. I love you man, bless your beautiful heart. She is lucky to have a friend in you as you are in having her. May we celebrate her beauty for eternity - XXOO Scholar


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