Next Time

By Sean Mc Shane

Somewhere . . .  or on the outskirts of,  black night,  storms raging above  
cheap motel,  rural roadside,  headlights swerve,  They arrive
One to the office,  One stays behind,  get a room,  all will be fine . . .

dismal sanctuary, room # 7,  old and dirty,  white trash heaven
door crashes open,  They enter,  slow struggling stumbles, to the center
moans of pain,  excruciating,  grunted curses,  nerves grating . . . 

She hits the light,  shuts the door,  with a stifled yelp,  He hits the floor
She rushes over,  knows what to do,  stop the bleeding,  where the bullet went thru 
stifled groans,  teeth grind,  fists clenched,  losing time . . .

whiskey cleansing,  bleeding stopped,  wound sealed, with a blade red-hot

drink away pain,  bed rest,  lying together,  Her had on His chest
gentle rain,  no light,  silent reflection,  on a wicked night
She lifts Her head,  looks over Him,  quietly concerned,  moves closer in . . .  

                     "  Anything I can do for ya, Baby ? "
                    
                     "  How 'bout not fuckin' shootin' me next time. "

                     "  How 'bout not fuckin' gettin' in the way of a fuckin'
                        cop next time ! "

                     "  How 'bout not turnin' every goddamn fuckin' situation
                        into the old fuckin' west  next time ?! "

Angry silence,  tension grows,  not for long,  true love shows
He wipes Her tears,  pulls Her in,  a simple whisper,  They both grin . . . 

                      "  There is somethin' ya can do for me,  your,  ahhh
                         ' word thing ' . . .  ya know  "   
                      
                      "  My word thing, huh ? "

                      "  Yeah . . . that's always cool. "

                      "  ' kay . . .  ya want me to wear the shoulder holster ?
                           And the black thong ? "

                      "  Next time. "

Their eyes close,  His mind clears,  She searches thoughts,  to drive away fears

                       "  Never the Hollywood glory story, just an impossible 
                          orgy of wild sex, good drugs and hard violence 
                          mocking what they call love, in a pastel silence
                          squeezed thru a slit, imagination's silver edge
                          written notes on brass vision, Our way - Our pledge
                          Painted in perfection, so scarce is the darkest red
                          try not to let go, of all the things we've said
                          they are now framed in true blue fassion, Our passion too
                          my biggest mistakes happen,  because I love you . . .  "

Exhaustion takes over,  He smiles asleep,  She returns it and follows deep . . . 

MORNING came . . .  She refused to cry . . . sometime in the night . . . He had died 

She stared at Him,  for a long while,  fighting the waves,  of surreal denial
She paced the room,  circling slow,  She begins to speak,  in Her haunting flow . . .

                        "  And the true climax is reached,  Our world now breached
                           Luna gripped her tides,  with no time for any Goodbyes
                           Tragic magic, we blended and mended in the swirl of
                            twilight blessings, We bloomed in the doom of Love . . . "

Dug out of a suitcase,  bottle of pills,  wide variety,  on the dresser it spills
She picks out pinks,  a few blues,  washes them down,  with last night's booze

                         "  No wayward surprise, the wind is an army of sad sighs
                            well known to the Heavens,  as half of me dies
                            But we did shatter the stars, that withheld Our wishes
                            violence is the Great Giver, of all the world's riches . . . "

She changed,  something else to wear,  a shoulder holster,  black thong underwear
Another 10 pills,  all washed down,  She looks at Him,  with a crumbling frown
She picks up a revolver, puts it away,  holstered again,  won't need it today

                          "  Riots in the inner calm, Peace extracted from killing
                             angry spirits create Our aura, no feeling more fulfilling
                             Now, in yesterday's tomorrow, the eternal white fire
                             vengeance was Our cerebral god, never a faceless liar . . . "

She begins to sway,  feeling the effects,  chemical cocktail,  with no regrets
stumbling to the bed,  crawling slow,  to be at His side,  when it's time to go
With Her head on His chest,  arm around,  eyes now closed,  light dimming down

                           "  The Reaper is coming . . .   
                                            in the guise . . . of a Fairy Tale Witch . . . "
                                                    
She lifts Her head,  for one last look,  famous last words,  in their unwritten book

                           "  . . .  and you better be waitin' for me . . .  you sonnova bitch . . . "











   
                             
                            




































 

















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Copyright 2012 Sean Mc Shane
Published on Wednesday, May 30, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

We've all killed our lovers on some level
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  • A former member wrote: Genius! Sean I like this work. You quite the imagination for the dramatic. It is a very captivating story poem I like your use of this The Reaper is coming in the guise of a Fairy Tale Witch. good job

  • Sean Mc Shane On Saturday, June 2, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks, B. I'm glad ya dig the story aspect and the Reaper/Witch line. It was a fun one to write. Thanks again. Later -

  • Nehema On Friday, June 1, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    wow, that was the most fun I've had in a while. You paint a clear picture of love that we all want to experience. If you're into polygamy, I want your other arm - between Dev and I, you'll never want for anything ;) - XXOO Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Saturday, June 2, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks, R. Glad ya had fun. I'd rather be an outlaw sharing a true love, than a lonely good boy. I hate to disappoint ya, but there can only be one queen in my kingdom. Who that is is still up for grabs ;) Thanks again and til next time -

  • Devilish On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    And the true climax is reached, Our world now breached Luna gripped her tides, with no time for any Goodbyes Tragic magic, we blended and mended in the swirl of twilight blessings, We bloomed in the doom of Love . . . " ............Fuck me. please.. this sean is our wedding vows.. Do you Devil take this here kick ass poet to have and to swallow from this day to the next?... FUCK YEAH.. Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    I DO . . . or . . . FUCK YEAH !! I will say those words immediately after the Horse-divorce in El Paso. I guess she wants full custody of the centaurs now. Ahhhh Dev, You actually made me blush. You always make me feel like a rock star. You're giving me a swelled head. Two of 'em. And I love ya for it. til next time -

  • Labella Blue On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Labella Blue (235)By person wrote:

    This has to be one of my favorite comments all time!

  • Sean Mc Shane On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Ey 'Bella, I'd have to say this is my all time fav. Til next time -

  • Devilish On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    I wanna bathe in your cum sean.. Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks, Dev. It's been awhile, so I should be able to fill the tub for ya. And thanks for the b-mark. Always cool. Til next time -

  • FadedBlues On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    helluva story...she sings him to eternal sleep w/her lullaby, then follows: romeo & juliette of cheap motels & blazing pistols...Bill Shakespeare collabs w/Mickey Spillane...

  • Sean Mc Shane On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks, 'Blues. I like your interpretation. Dead on. Thanks for the cool collab compliment. later -

  • dwells On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    DEfinitely true love personified on a very different plane, Bonnie and Clydish almost, except she plugged him by mistake. Can't call that bullet back - great piece SEan, thanks.

  • Sean Mc Shane On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks, d. And thanks again for not making a Natural Born Killers reference. Not a fan of that flick. But B&C are probably my favorite love story of all time. Thanks for the cool compliments. later -


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