Next Time
By Sean Mc Shane
Somewhere . . . or on the outskirts of, black night, storms raging
above
cheap motel, rural roadside, headlights swerve, They
arrive
One to the office, One stays behind, get a room, all
will be fine . . .
dismal sanctuary, room # 7, old and dirty,
white trash heaven
door crashes open, They enter, slow struggling
stumbles, to the center
moans of pain, excruciating, grunted curses,
nerves grating . . .
She hits the light, shuts the door,
with a stifled yelp, He hits the floor
She rushes over, knows
what to do, stop the bleeding, where the bullet went thru
stifled
groans, teeth grind, fists clenched, losing time . . .
whiskey cleansing, bleeding stopped, wound sealed, with a blade red-hot
drink away pain, bed rest, lying together, Her had on His
chest
gentle rain, no light, silent reflection, on a wicked
night
She lifts Her head, looks over Him, quietly concerned, moves
closer in . . .
" Anything I can do for ya, Baby ? "
" How 'bout not fuckin' shootin' me
next time. "
" How
'bout not fuckin' gettin' in the way of a fuckin'
cop next time ! "
"
How 'bout not turnin' every goddamn fuckin' situation
into the old fuckin' west next time ?! "
Angry silence, tension
grows, not for long, true love shows
He wipes Her tears, pulls
Her in, a simple whisper, They both grin . . .
" There is somethin' ya can do for me, your, ahhh
' word thing ' . . . ya know "
" My word thing, huh ?
"
" Yeah . . .
that's always cool. "
" ' kay . . . ya want me to wear the shoulder holster ?
And the black thong ? "
"
Next time. "
Their eyes close, His mind clears, She searches
thoughts, to drive away fears
"
Never the Hollywood glory story, just an impossible
orgy of wild sex, good drugs and hard violence
mocking
what they call love, in a pastel silence
squeezed thru a slit, imagination's silver edge
written notes on brass vision, Our way - Our pledge
Painted in perfection, so scarce is the darkest red
try not to let go, of all the things we've said
they are now framed in true blue fassion, Our passion too
my biggest mistakes
happen, because I love you . . . "
Exhaustion takes over, He
smiles asleep, She returns it and follows deep . . .
MORNING
came . . . She refused to cry . . . sometime in the night . . . He had
died
She stared at Him, for a long while, fighting the
waves, of surreal denial
She paced the room, circling slow,
She begins to speak, in Her haunting flow . . .
" And the true climax is reached, Our world now breached
Luna
gripped her tides, with no time for any Goodbyes
Tragic magic, we blended and mended in the swirl of
twilight blessings, We bloomed in the doom of Love . . . "
Dug
out of a suitcase, bottle of pills, wide variety, on the dresser
it spills
She picks out pinks, a few blues, washes them down, with
last night's booze
" No wayward surprise, the wind is an army of sad sighs
well known to the Heavens, as half of me dies
But we did shatter the stars, that withheld Our wishes
violence is the Great Giver, of all the world's riches . . . "
She changed, something else to wear, a shoulder holster, black
thong underwear
Another 10 pills, all washed down, She looks
at Him, with a crumbling frown
She picks up a revolver, puts it
away, holstered again, won't need it today
" Riots in the inner calm, Peace extracted from killing
angry spirits create Our aura, no feeling more fulfilling
Now, in yesterday's tomorrow, the eternal white fire
vengeance
was Our cerebral god, never a faceless liar . . . "
She begins
to sway, feeling the effects, chemical cocktail, with no regrets
stumbling to the bed, crawling slow, to be at His side, when
it's time to go
With Her head on His chest, arm around, eyes
now closed, light dimming down
" The Reaper is coming . . .
in the guise . . . of a Fairy Tale Witch . . . "
She lifts Her head, for one last look, famous last words, in their
unwritten book
" . . . and you better be waitin' for me . . . you sonnova bitch
. . . "
Author's Note:
We've all killed our lovers on some levelComments on "Next Time"
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A former member wrote:
Genius! Sean I like this work. You quite the imagination for the dramatic. It is a very captivating story poem I like your use of this The Reaper is coming in the guise of a Fairy Tale Witch. good job
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On Saturday, June 2, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, B. I'm glad ya dig the story aspect and the Reaper/Witch line. It was a fun one to write. Thanks again. Later -
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On Friday, June 1, 2012, Nehema
(958) wrote:
wow, that was the most fun I've had in a while. You paint a clear picture of love that we all want to experience. If you're into polygamy, I want your other arm - between Dev and I, you'll never want for anything ;) - XXOO
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On Saturday, June 2, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, R. Glad ya had fun. I'd rather be an outlaw sharing a true love, than a lonely good boy. I hate to disappoint ya, but there can only be one queen in my kingdom. Who that is is still up for grabs ;) Thanks again and til next time -
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On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
And the true climax is reached, Our world now breached Luna gripped her tides, with no time for any Goodbyes Tragic magic, we blended and mended in the swirl of twilight blessings, We bloomed in the doom of Love . . . " ............Fuck me. please.. this sean is our wedding vows.. Do you Devil take this here kick ass poet to have and to swallow from this day to the next?... FUCK YEAH..
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On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
I DO . . . or . . . FUCK YEAH !! I will say those words immediately after the Horse-divorce in El Paso. I guess she wants full custody of the centaurs now. Ahhhh Dev, You actually made me blush. You always make me feel like a rock star. You're giving me a swelled head. Two of 'em. And I love ya for it. til next time -
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On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Labella Blue
(235) wrote:
This has to be one of my favorite comments all time!
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On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Ey 'Bella, I'd have to say this is my all time fav. Til next time -
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On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, Devilish
(2633) wrote:
I wanna bathe in your cum sean..
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On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, Dev. It's been awhile, so I should be able to fill the tub for ya. And thanks for the b-mark. Always cool. Til next time -
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On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, FadedBlues
(2096) wrote:
helluva story...she sings him to eternal sleep w/her lullaby, then follows: romeo & juliette of cheap motels & blazing pistols...Bill Shakespeare collabs w/Mickey Spillane...
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On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, 'Blues. I like your interpretation. Dead on. Thanks for the cool collab compliment. later -
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On Wednesday, May 30, 2012, dwells
(4177) wrote:
DEfinitely true love personified on a very different plane, Bonnie and Clydish almost, except she plugged him by mistake. Can't call that bullet back - great piece SEan, thanks.
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On Thursday, May 31, 2012, Sean Mc Shane
(606) wrote:
Thanks, d. And thanks again for not making a Natural Born Killers reference. Not a fan of that flick. But B&C are probably my favorite love story of all time. Thanks for the cool compliments. later -