Black Door

By Sean Mc Shane

* cue piano . . .

Before we dance to this sorrowful theme
           of another hard goodbye
I want to see your beautiful smile
           in a silence that whispers, why ?

on a shimmering Heatwave Horizon
           we can recall our first words of Love
chase them over the rolling Evermeadow Hills
           and down into the Valley of the Wounded Dove

thru a big Black Door in a long White Hall
            to the maze tunnels under Memory Lane
below on going Streets of Fire
            fueled by promises wrapped in pain

Move into the black light shadow
            carve away the filth given by mistrust
fresh scars come from shattered hope
            to remain deep down in unchecked lust

We both pushed and pulled from the side
            over the center of a collapsing dream
falling in even harder than before
            that explains the echoing scream

Now we walk this stranger's road
            no idea where we are anymore
you on one side - me on the other
            now where is that big Black Door ?

we sealed our Fate with our first kiss
            the stars hid from us at that time
Astral Lovers who saw our destiny, then
            now, wish to hear our last futile rhyme . . .


























 

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Copyright 2012 Sean Mc Shane
Published on Thursday, June 7, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

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  • dwells On Monday, June 11, 2012, dwells (4285)By person wrote:

    Lovers doomed from the start perhaps, sorry I missed this one a few days ago. Some stark and uniquely riveting images, well done Sean!

  • Sean Mc Shane On Monday, June 11, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    Thanks, d. Yeah they crashed and burned pretty quick. Glad ya like it. Later -

  • A former member wrote: Wonderfully dark and cryptic. But i dont know if its just me or not but I see a shade of hope in this piece. A great write eliciting many emotions and responses. Thx for sharing.

  • Sean Mc Shane On Monday, June 11, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    Thanks, D. Hope and false hope are spinning around in there, somewhere. I'm glad ya like this. Cool. Later -

  • Magdalena On Saturday, June 9, 2012, Magdalena (615)By person wrote:

    A beautiful tale of love and love lost Sean...It can be a beautiful agony... A wonderful pen. :)

  • Sean Mc Shane On Saturday, June 9, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    Thanks, M. I agree totally. And I like that, 'a beautiful agony' . Excellent way to describe that rollercoaster. Cool. Thanks again, til then -

  • Nehema On Friday, June 8, 2012, Nehema (960)By person wrote:

    I'm keeping this til my divorce is final. Made me cry - read it twice; cried twice! Thanks for writing and sharing this, I needed a good cry today - XXOO Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Saturday, June 9, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    Thanks, Robyn. What a powerful compliment. I'm sorry I made ya cry, but if it was a good cry, then I guess that's okay. Break-ups are hard, but you 're a strong, beautiful gal who writes wonderful poems. So I see you coming out the other end stronger than you thought you'd be. Cool. Til next time -

  • Devilish On Friday, June 8, 2012, Devilish (2658)By person wrote:

    Mmm.. Your impecable and I loooove the fuck out of you and your poetry... I'm around when ya nee it.. =)... So beautiful . Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Friday, June 8, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    Thanks, Dev. You always make me smile. And it makes me happy to know you're always around when I need ya. And I don't just mean our exploits with the Omish Mafia. Til next time -

  • FadedBlues On Thursday, June 7, 2012, FadedBlues (2169)By person wrote:

    ...you packed a lot of heartbreak into this, man...&'Streets of Fire' is an awesome movie, Diane Lane has tortured me in many dreams...

  • Sean Mc Shane On Friday, June 8, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    Thanks,'Blues. And yes, Streets of Fire is one of the best forgotten movies out there. Love to find it on disc. Cool. later -

  • A former member wrote: I'll admit this piece made me anxious. Just because of love separated. Great piece.

  • Sean Mc Shane On Friday, June 8, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (612)By person wrote:

    Thanks, BD. There's no worse anxiety than that of a failing love. Thanks again. Til next time -


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