Star Drama

By Sean Mc Shane


My Spirit was already locked in on Saturn Girl
                following her thru a fading rift in a universal swirl
in the late moments of an early solar burning
                under the Twilight Sea her world was turning
thru tormented visions of how it came to be
                and the tragic death of the interdemensional me

Saturn Girl was everything to the Unknown Other
                 bloodlust prayers to the Atomic Mother
starscapes fading into the fires of Avalon
                 Comet tail crystals no longer travel on . . .

Behind the black curtain of a 1000 sunsets
                 we journey to the Underground Moon
Cults of the Serpent Youth will come
                 dropping seeds in the Wombs of Doom

infinite death to the Secret Bell of Silence
                  saved by a telepathic broadcast in Midnight's wake
tear down their sacred halls of mystic science
                  until another Supernova is ready to take

Obsidian souls that slither thru Astral Temples
                   trapped in organic prisons - no silver-winged flight
then, over the Black Ice Hills of Neptune's Rise
                   comes a Steampunk Witch and a Cosmic Knight

in alliance with myself and a bloodoath to Saturn Girl
                   
We all moved in thru sonic vibrations from a Black Center

Stellar quadrants fall into the Void's depths

as a distant radio signal seized the final Quasar's center  . . .
























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Copyright 2012 Sean Mc Shane
Published on Monday, October 8, 2012.     Filed under: "Poetry"

Author's Note:

yep, smokin' kryptonite, and readin' 50's comics . . . what ? Like you don't ?
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  • dwells On Monday, October 15, 2012, dwells (4177)By person wrote:

    Much enjoyed this journey into the Outer Limits and still pondering some of the protagonists, always a trip and find a lead shield for that kryptonite! Cheers.

  • Sean Mc Shane On Tuesday, October 16, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks d, yeah this one was pretty 'far out'. Ahh, that was bad. Glad you liked it. Cool, man. Later -

  • FadedBlues On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, FadedBlues (2096)By person wrote:

    ...this would make a dramatic graphic novel. can't wait for chapter 2: Revenge of the Unknown Other (or something)...

  • Sean Mc Shane On Tuesday, October 9, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks, 'Blues. An thanks for the inspiration to continue this far-out saga. That would be a cool title. Thanks again. Later -

  • Nehema On Monday, October 8, 2012, Nehema (958)By person wrote:

    This made me wanna watch Flash Gordon... lol Like, I do - your rhymes are always fun no matter the topic ;) - XXOO Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Monday, October 8, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks Robyne. Nothin' better than the old Flash Gordon with the plastic rocket and the sparkler in the rear. Awesome. Til next time -

  • Devilish On Monday, October 8, 2012, Devilish (2633)By person wrote:

    Lol.. your authors note made me laugh so hard.. and no i dont ofcourse not. i'm a good girl. sean your a nut.. lmao . so does saturn girl have a pretty pussy i've always wondered. Scholar

  • Sean Mc Shane On Monday, October 8, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Yeah, but it's got a ring around it ;) Thanks Dev, you always make me laugh too. Til next time _

  • Dei On Monday, October 8, 2012, Dei (663)By person wrote:

    this read smooth. In my head an imaginary DJ was layin' down some sick beats as i read through these images. beautiful.

  • Sean Mc Shane On Monday, October 8, 2012, Sean Mc Shane (606)By person wrote:

    Thanks Astra, funny ya say that, I actually listen to sick beats on Youtube sometimes when writin', This was one of those times. Thanks again for the cool comps. Til next time -


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