Comments by DIATRICUS

  • "Well-documented procedure for future habits formed -- your own personal warning, I wonder? I sense that the protagonist here knows the danger of getting to good at the art of deception... well done."
    Posted by DIATRICUS on ""Thou shalt not commit adultery"" by Crush Room
  • "...yet even the hands of censorship cannot deny that this is a well-scripted and well-developed work -- time alone might judge if any poet (dark or otherwise) deserves such respect. Any good piece has some hidden agenda and/or motivation..."
    Posted by DIATRICUS on "dark poetry in vain" by alaskanamber
  • "Gotta say it, and pardon the ruse, with this, you've clearly proved, it's true, the real always trumps the ideal... wtf... most excellent retort indeed!"
    Posted by DIATRICUS on "Hmmm.....Allow me to Retort." by AdrianJ
  • ""nyquil illusions of a grand nite.stand band" -- this and the last line just resonate so well with me... ouch. Great read. Thanks!"
    Posted by DIATRICUS on "!!blow me!!" by denver nitze
  • "This took me a couple of reads... I especially enjoyed the last two lines. You have a wonderful sense of minimalist capture -- a tremendous technique. Thank you."
    Posted by DIATRICUS on "Collective Sin" by Withering petals
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