Cotton Clouds, Forget-Me-Not's.

By Aleas

Of begets, I begot
Cotton clouds, Forget-Me-Not's
Knighted skies, belated starts
And a love "...to be continued"

Peel the petals off the flower
And as lady luck would have her
Evened out at number seven
I loved her so, as I remember

With tethered wings spread several times
For several flights on heaven's ride
Where I believe she peeks and hides
In cotton clouds, Sunflare skies

While I plant Forget-Me-Lies.

She had me shot
Right from the start
For of begets, with love begot
Forget me here or now remember
She loved me so, or so I thought.

('Till Death Did You Part)

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Published on Monday, June 23, 2008. Filed under: "Ironic" and "Poetry"

Comments on "Cotton Clouds, Forget-Me-Not's."

A former member wrote: You have a true way with words, incredibly smart!
On Tuesday, March 27, 2012, Devilish (2633) wrote:

Nice!! Hello there you.. i appreciate the comment on my work.. nice to meet you and glad to see you here .
A former member wrote: Nice and dry... yet witty. I like this! Great to read - very much enjoyed. I like your wording too. =D
A former member wrote: Double up on sketso's word here, thanks for the ride.
On Tuesday, June 24, 2008, Narcissa (391) wrote:

Yes...This was fun to read. Bitter sweet.
On Tuesday, June 24, 2008, snakeskingrin (59) wrote:

very clever word usage..this piece crackles with INTELLIGENCE and a dry wit...I really dig it!! Thanks for sharing! :)Snake
On Monday, June 23, 2008, DIATRICUS (64) wrote:

most excellent -- like a roller-coaster, twisting and turning!!
On Monday, June 23, 2008, Sketso (416) wrote:

Loved the rhythm of this work, and the flow, with the intentional agressive disruptions. In one word? BRAVO!