Bus Stop

By GraySky

Precipitation and streetlights
On the window
While I search for you...
They look like stars
In the background,
This metallic black.
It's the thought that counts,
And I don't mind the rain.

Unauthorized Copying Is Prohibited. Ask the author first.
Copyright 2005 GraySky
Published on Monday, February 7, 2005.     Filed under: "Poetry"
Log In or Join (free) to see the special features here.

Comments on "Bus Stop"

Log in to post comments.
  • DIATRICUS On Wednesday, June 18, 2008, DIATRICUS (64)By person wrote:

    a pleasant and bountiful read...

  • carlosjackal On Tuesday, August 21, 2007, carlosjackal (2787)By person wrote:

    So much conveyed, a moment captured wonderfully. Those first two line drew me in completely. -Carl

  • The Crimson Queen On Monday, February 7, 2005, The Crimson Queen (917)By person wrote:

    short but great imagery..beautifully worded :)

Contribution Level

Share/Save This Post
subscribeGraySky's Latest Works Feed



Join DarkPoetry Join to get a profile like this for yourself. It's quick and free.

How to Criticize Without Causing Offense
© 1998-2024 DarkPoetry LLC
Donate
[Join (free)]    [More Poetry]    [Get Help]    [Our Poets]    [Read Poems]    [Terms & Privacy]

Attention: Darkpoetry is now in maintenance mode and will be shutting down soon. Save your work if you wish to keep it.