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dark poetry in vain
By alaskanamber
I have been silenced once again
deep deep down i hide within
rage and anger no longer with me
all that's left is my misery
I tried to use poetic expression
to communicate my friends, my frustration
it's so easy to slip into rhyme
hides my fears that it's not my time
write I will to ease the pain
never is dark poetry in vain
one day my suffering will ease
hopefully then I can live in peace
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© 2007 alaskanamber
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A former member wrote:
okay, Well I know the background behind this people and why you where silenced. Its not a good thing to write such bad things about such a respected Dark Poet girl ][ ][
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On Sunday, June 22, 2008, DIATRICUS
(64)
wrote:
...yet even the hands of censorship cannot deny that this is a well-scripted and well-developed work -- time alone might judge if any poet (dark or otherwise) deserves such respect. Any good piece has some hidden agenda and/or motivation...
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A former member wrote:
Great work.
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On Thursday, January 11, 2007, carlosjackal
(3021) wrote:
This was sweet release indeed..Write on..
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On Thursday, January 11, 2007, lstdarkness
(26) wrote:
great job at telling how writing makes you feel and tick.. I love to see how writing makes people feel...
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A former member wrote:
nice work...though not my outlet..its kinda on a mixed ratio for me...its like i write and i become sadder..like i drown more deeper..and at times i am "YOU".....
nice work though.....though i doubt the peace part...its technically neverquite there!!!
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On Thursday, January 11, 2007, Aunty Depressant
(434) wrote:
Always good to have a release. Not good to keep feelings, especially misery within. I will admit I write more that I do not post.Some things I will write for another, and not sure if it should be for all to see. Peace to you.
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