She is, I am, too good, guilty, for me, Sinner

By demonofthefall

Beauty Behold, vixen strides, lips of whispers, sex in one her
Breasts glory, ink soaked skin, stars in her eyes, looks of deception perfection provocative smile, sharp curves, this one only comes once in a while.


Guilty sinner, denunciation, at your step, tread with caution
A parody life, strings attached, humorous existence
Body hijacked, whiskey and drugs, smoke a lung to rot
To liver and dier ive always had kid’neys
Die from the break, or die to have one. Leave

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© 2008 demonofthefall
Published on Wednesday, July 2, 2008.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: quirky. but good all the same. thanks for a good read

  • demonofthefall On Friday, July 4, 2008, demonofthefall (22)By person wrote:

    thanks for the comments, i appreciate it :)

  • Alanarchy On Wednesday, July 2, 2008, Alanarchy (1168)By person wrote:

    It was the offbeat rythm that got to me, ass well. And the shape of the lines. Each one popped with a very stark emotional response. Write on. Welcome.

  • DIATRICUS On Wednesday, July 2, 2008, DIATRICUS (64)By person wrote:

    witty, non-conformist, off-rhythm, most excellent... thank you!

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