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Sunken Treasure....
By Crush Room
Once just an exhillerating
breathe apart were we;
You are now oceans away.
The foreshore breeze has
picked up and destiny
dictates a new beginning for you.
Embarking on a journey
where the sea is calm, inviting....serene;
And, her beauty
extends beyond even the sharpest eye.
Your words speak of wholesome
unashamed adulation, awe
and a splash of unity...
Nothing compared to
my hollow rusty offerings.
My tears hold hands
with every memory of you.....
and I accept that I must s.
i.
n.
k.
to the bottom of your ocean
to let you rise to be the person
that you need to be.....
It's ok.....you can let me go now....
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© 2008 Crush Room
Comments on "Sunken Treasure...."
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A former member wrote:
So very beautiful. nicely put together too.
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A former member wrote:
That really was something special, and you sound like someone not worth letting go off.
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On Wednesday, July 9, 2008, DIATRICUS
(64)
wrote:
nicely presented... well done
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On Wednesday, July 9, 2008, Echoes of Orpheus
(359) wrote:
Making sacrifice for this person only shows the love to be more true, making it all the more heartbreaking that they cannot be together... well written
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On Wednesday, July 9, 2008, Crush Room
(22) wrote:
Heartbreaking it is....xx
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