Brainwashed society

By diavolessa

In the glory days,
of emptiness,
In the forbidden temple ,
of monarchy.
Bunch of liars ,
are preaching prophecy!!.

In the glory days,
of emptiness.
Deep,
in the memory's of history
Lived,
A rat race .
Named,
Brain washed society.

(this is one of my oldest poems! its one other style i do not use anymore!)

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Copyright 2003 darkside
Published on Sunday, March 16, 2003.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: that`s exactly what i feel about that society, too. hate that rat race... luckily i stepped off it before it was too late... feeling much better now when being just me! :)

  • Jonas On Thursday, March 27, 2003, Jonas (720)By person wrote:

    i still kinda like the flow. gangs of rabid vermin crawled all over europe and a cloud of death sweapt away the deserving and undeserving alike... that's just my impression, not interpretation

  • A former member wrote: sweet format. last three lines bring it all together.. good on ya. way to be


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