The Oak

By Mr King

The oak from which I came loved my Grandpa.

She loves antiques.
She loves Los Angeles.

The oak from which I came taught me right from wrong.

She taught me...
"Old junk is better than new crap."

The oak from which I came took me in when I leaped and I fell.

She always gives and gives to those like...
Greenpeace, Meals on Wheels, and PETA.

And when everyone else wanted Christmas Eve...
She gave that away too.

The oak from which I came faced life's fire...
And she got burned and felt the pain.

But she stood up and held our family together...
Over and over again.

And when I saw the world's injustice and I told her...
She reminded me that I was "singing to the choir."

The oak from which I came loved me and she told me that...
Hugging me was "like hugging an oak tree."

But my Grandma is really the towering oak from which I came...

And I was the acorn.

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Copyright 2004 Seth David King
Published on Sunday, December 26, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • A former member wrote: Wounderfull peace.... made me think of my nana

  • Solace On Sunday, January 23, 2005, Solace (1065)By person wrote:

    *smiles* this was so candid and sweet...a brilliant dedicatory work that is brimming with all the right emotion...always a pleasure to read what you write, always...

  • Soulfire On Tuesday, January 4, 2005, Soulfire (96)By person wrote:

    Goosebumps....and tears...very beautiful. And dear Mr. King I must say Thank-You for your kind words about my work...after reading YOUR poems, it is truly a compliment!

  • Mr King On Tuesday, December 28, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    Better to eulogize the living while living because they get to be here in the flesh for it with you... ALL LOVE, Seth

  • A former member wrote: Therefore, I'm greatful you can speak of your Grandma in this way. Much love Seth, & thank you. ~Shane~

  • A former member wrote: I just read this after seeing Elisa 2's comment... Technically, I would've had 2 grandmas... One died before I was born... The other was out of her mind...

  • A former member wrote: Behind every great (substitute teacher) there is a (grandma).

  • A former member wrote: If I write the way you do about your own relations, I'm no longer writing a poem, but writing a eulogy for someone's funeral in this world.

  • elisa On Monday, December 27, 2004, elisa (1595)By person wrote:

    what a coincidence I once hugged a Mighty Oak.....I still think about that tree fondly;) perfection~elisa

  • A former member wrote: wonderful write hugs:kristen

  • Drifter On Monday, December 27, 2004, Drifter (265)By person wrote:

    Thats beautiful dude, a great gift to her. Close family is somethign i've always wanted. Great write.

  • MyBrokenMynd On Monday, December 27, 2004, MyBrokenMynd (167)By person wrote:

    me too... :(

  • Mr King On Friday, December 31, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    Then create that my beautiful people. 1always, Seth


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