Primal Rage

By Mr King

What makes me so intense like this?

Primal pain...
Primal fear...
Primal rage!

What held me driven and motivated so powerfully in this way?

Primal pain...
Primal fear...
Primal rage!

What blocked me for so long from succeeding at what I had truly earned?

Primal pain...
Primal fear...
Primal rage!


From what am I at last setting myself free?

Primal pain...
Primal fear...
Primal rage!



Finally free now...
To dive deep within the Universal Bliss of the Cosmic Tao!

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Copyright 2004 Seth David King
Published on Tuesday, July 20, 2004.     Filed under: "Poetry"
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  • mysticventures On Thursday, August 26, 2004, mysticventures (538)By person wrote:

    excellent seth ! but could we all be free of these things...

  • Mr King On Saturday, August 28, 2004, Mr King (547)By person wrote:

    Yes, actually... life will always contain fear and pain... but to be free from the primal fear, pain, and rage of our primary formative years... from this "primal" fear, pain, and rage it is possible to be free... 1, Seth

  • A former member wrote: awesome write, I like alot of your graphic art as well.

  • elisa On Friday, August 13, 2004, elisa (1616)By person wrote:

    you have a lot of passion! I like:)

  • urbanhumility On Thursday, July 22, 2004, urbanhumility (1175)By person wrote:

    I agree, with North........well done my friend........urban

  • Northstar On Tuesday, July 20, 2004, Northstar (375)By person wrote:

    clear, raw affirmation of self


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